Dinner for One
By TwrchTwryth -- Report
Acacia has a crazy idea--she's going to eat herself. Voring with portals.
Short story, more of an exercise with the idea than anything else.
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Posted by SooperWooper 14 years ago Report
For whatever reason, this turned me on much more than other stories I have read. Maybe it's because I love Portal, screwing with reality, or the thought of someone eating herself. I'd love to read more impossibilities! ...More impossible than people eating people whole, I suppose...Hhmm...
Posted by 20002000 14 years ago Report
Ha! I like your style, you make up your own rules just like me.
Posted by SooperWooper 14 years ago Report
Thank you for the compliment, new friend!
Posted by 20002000 14 years ago Report
Cave Johnson, We're done here!
Posted by SooperWooper 14 years ago Report
HA! I get that reference!
Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report
A very neat story.
Posted by Cruich 14 years ago Report
Hmm...I guess that the line "before the laws of physics realized the impossibility of what she was doing" is your way of accounting for the fact that as her front half moved forward to eat more, her bottom half would also be moving forward, thus pulling herself out of her mouth.
I thought the way you were going to handle this would be to have the portals be mobile, and close the distance between each other, which would allow her to eat at least an amount of herself before the portals met in the middle.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 14 years ago Report
That's the way it worked in my head--that the portals moved toward each other. However, I didn't make it explicit in the text because then I would have felt unreasonably compelled to explain how she got the portals to move toward each other. Without a satisfactory explanation, automatically and perfectly-timed moving portals were too much for my suspension of disbelief. Not the other various impossible things in the story, mind you, just that. Still, I left a bit of the logic in there--that's how they winked out of existence at the perfect time, a line that struck me very early in the conceptualizing stage.
Posted by Gypa 14 years ago Report
Can I suggest time travelling paradox.
Posted by BardicLasher 14 years ago Report
Just put them on rolling (or easily sliding) platforms.
Posted by SooperWooper 14 years ago Report
It doesn't matter how many times I read this, it is still an immense turnon! I'd kill to read more Portal vore situations1 The possibilities are endless!
Posted by Aickavon12 14 years ago Report
I'm... this... it's a great story but... I... ME HEAD GOT BAD PAIN!
Posted by SooperWooper 14 years ago Report
One line stands out to me every time I read this; "She had done this many times since getting the portal gun, in many different positions from many different angles and sometimes with one or more partners." It makes one curious. What other wondrous tales does this woman hold?
Posted by Dravone 13 years ago Report
This has to be the hottest vore story I've ever read I think to use portals to eat others let alone yourself very good
Posted by chimcharinsanity 13 years ago Report
This story is still as great as it was several years ago. The concept of self-vore still baffles this curious mind, and very likely I could not have done such a good job as you had without confusing my self several dozen times.
I applaud you, sir, for this is a stupendous story, and a stupendous idea. I wish self-vore was more common then it is, but it is what it is. Thanks for the great read :)
Posted by CrimsonShadow 13 years ago Report
Wow, possibly the weirdest vore story I've ever read, and that's saying something. Instant fave, for the mind screw alone.
Posted by DRayElliott 12 years ago Report
I just don't get the appeal of this story. No one would willingly do something like this unless they were insane or suicidally depressed. I. Just can't understand suicide, that's exactly what she did, and she knew it.
Posted by crystalbabie 12 years ago Report
She like eating, she liked being eaten. She wanted to do something never done before
Posted by genericness123 12 years ago Report
This is pretty funny, I will admit. Interestingly, I actually have a definite picture of the end result: she finds herself in her belly with a bloated stomach, containing herself, and so on, proportionally ad infinitum in both directions. Twrch, you have just invented fractal vore, and I applaud you.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 12 years ago Report
Hmmm...rather than turtles all the way down, it's Acacias all the way within...