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I doubt this is an idea that in new, but as I typed it I realised how easily it could become a non-fatal vore work... but I stick to my plan. Honestly, I am highly dissatisfied with this. It is made to be vore and little else, but the vore is relatively vague, so in a way it has no purpose or direction, but I'm loathe to spend so long trying to force this out I can't really just leave it laying around, so I hope someone can enjoy it on concept alone.
It's unfortunate anouther long period of no additions is broken with this piece... I find myself low on ideas recently, so I'll say it clearly, I'm willing to consider suggestions, it helps motivation.
Of note, this is my first piece, not requested, that doesn't include any dragons... I sicken myself, just kidding...

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Posted by dragon_lady 7 years ago Report

Again I must say GREAT WORK!!! Even tho it didn't involve dragons, still you did a wondeful job on this story!


Posted by DrakeZephyr 7 years ago Report

You're too kind, as I said, I don't think this turned out as I would have hoped, but I'm glad you like it


Posted by dragon_lady 7 years ago Report

I think it turned out very well ^^


Posted by newenglandee 7 years ago Report

Hey, dude, at least the victim was a horrible person and somebody in your story actually felt BAD about what happened to her. Which puts this story miles above a dozen artists and writers I could name off the top of my head.


Posted by DrakeZephyr 7 years ago Report

Everyone as a story type they like, I generally try to keep my stories relatively light, with, if not a happy ending, a positive note. It's an interesting challenge to put a positive spin on someone being eaten alive.


Posted by MagicOddEffect 7 years ago Report

I know the feeling. The "I forced this, and didn't like it" feeling when reading over a work again. But, just like most of the instances when it strikes, the work is excellent, and far better than the artist thinks.
An interesting story, and a clever idea. Also quite a good read.


Posted by DrakeZephyr 7 years ago Report

Thank you, I hope you're right and it is better than I think, certainly I rarely feel good about what I produce, yet some people continue to watch me.


Posted by annethreesnakie 7 years ago Report

That was very well done! I am very partial to snake vore :) I think you did very well!