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Tags: Adorable Blonde brunette character interactions Commission conn Dessert Endosoma Fairy Tale Female Prey fingernails Food Food play Gentle Predator Honey Human Humanoid latex M/F M/multiple prey Macro/Micro Magic Male Pred Micro Prey Mouth play Multiple Preys Non-fatal Oral Vore playful Red Head Redheaded sexual Silly Soft Vore Swallowing teasing tongue play Unwilling world building
A series commissioned by Conn.
The Borrowers live right under the nose of home-dweller Chris of the Big World.
Adorable and mischievous, follow the adventures of these tiny intrepid women of the Featherkin (and mushroom) colony.
Light-hearted, playful, whimsical soft vore.
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Posted by deletedaccount505 11 years ago Report
Nice. The opening was rather clever to pull in the reader. This story as your others still have a friendly tone, I like that. = D The characters, the Borrowers, are rather colorful rounded characters.
Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report
Thank you! I wonder if you would consider Gypsy Blood to have a friendly tone as well. But, yes, I did intend for this story to be light-hearted and friendly (:
Posted by deletedaccount505 11 years ago Report
I'll have to check it out and since they're broken in chapters I'll take my time and see. If a story from you comes off dark and grim it will take me by surprise. Not to say that light-heated stories, especially those with vore are bad, because the way you write them is just unique.
Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report
Intimacy doesn't get dark until the last few chapters. The final one is quite morbid. And Gypsy Blood has its highs and lows; when it's on the low end, it gets very dark.
Posted by deletedaccount505 11 years ago Report
= D
Well, you know the saying, "The darker the berry the sweeter the juice." Wait. That's the wrong one. But, yeah dark stories rock.
Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report
Rofl. I like that hmmmmmm
Posted by tangent 11 years ago Report
Ohhh this is adorable and lovely! I'm in love with all the little terms for the different kind of Borrowers. The lighthearted tone really gets me, I love that you can do it just as well as your darker storiess. So great.
It's incredibly similar to the scenario my ex and I RP'd with when he offered to experiment with vore with me for the very first time, Borrowers and all. :'] Ahh, unreal. <33
Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report
I had so much fun with it. I figured that The Borrowers wouldn't talk like us since they have an entirely different upbringing and environment to mature in.
I had fun with the terms as well (: I figured they would be named after parts of nature. Like we're named after patron saints :P
I love Robin too, she's a nutcase xD In a good way. Needs some ritalin.
Posted by MidnightRose 11 years ago Report
Beautiful writing style. <33
Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report
Thank you! <3
Posted by PocketHero 11 years ago Report
*comes in sniffing around* Hmm, ah-hah! I thought I smelled the scent of beautiful writing around here. ;)
Your writing is so artistically intoxicating for my mind~ Mmmhmm, delicious... is simply the best word I have for it. X)
Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report
Oh my goodness. Thank you Mango (:
I am pleasantly surprised that everyone seems to have really enjoyed this!
Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report
310 views in 4 days??? Wow! Thank you (:
Posted by nephilim 11 years ago Report
Broke the 1,000 mark in 3 months o_o how cool