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This idea came to me after reading a number of anne2snakie's stories. It's fun and light and filled with absurdities. Melanie's six sisters were all devoured when they were 18 and now she has turned 18.
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Posted by massvore 11 years ago Report
Wow this family is " f***" up. no seriously great story
Posted by massvore 11 years ago Report
Wow this family is " f***" up. no seriously great story
Posted by Gypa 11 years ago Report
Nice to see your not dead but do you have any ohter stories in the work?
Posted by SkyLark 11 years ago Report
Ooooooo, I liked this one. It's got just about everything.
Posted by BardicLasher 11 years ago Report
That was a wonderful story.
Posted by miranda_dragon 11 years ago Report
That was delightfully absurd! :)
Posted by SooperWooper 11 years ago Report
This is a really interesting experience! The point of view is an unused one, and that makes it all the more enjoyable! Bravo!
Posted by dragon32078 11 years ago Report
I loved this story. It is very hot, and I would love to read about the narrator being eaten.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 11 years ago Report
Now that was very nicely done.
I do wonder what ended up happening to Marcy, though.
Posted by TW 10 years ago Report
Nicely written, good pacing. Great job on the flash backs. Just enough to keep it interesting without going overboard.
Posted by Shadowgamer 9 years ago Report
I wonder if the elephant eating the cheerleader squad is a direct link to one of your older stories, where they mention an elephant charging out and eating a bunch one day... The story with the drug dog and the mule eating girls :P.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 9 years ago Report
Good catch. With 80+ vore stories on this site now, it shouldn't be too surprising if I slip in a reference to some of the others. I don't think this is quite the same world as "Better Than the Donkey" (still wish I'd come up with a better name, but it was my first story) since human vore is more run of the mill in this story, but since both of them deal with the acceptance of inevitable future devourement the reference seemed appropriate.
Posted by DrKillianNight 7 years ago Report
This was a great story! It got me off pretty fast but i held on till the end~
So with the end does it in ply you the reader are her preditor?
Posted by TwrchTwryth 7 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it! Yes, this is supposed to be Melanie telling the family history of inevitable vore to her soon-to-be predator. Since the predator does not have an active role in the telling, the reader is free to put themselves (or anyone/anything else) in that place.
Posted by Kingofblades 2 years ago Report
What happened to Marcy?
Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report
Well, she was older than the remaining sisters, wasn't friends with them, and once Evelyn was gone she was out of their orbit. She ate two more girls in their graduating class before going to college at a small liberal arts school. She washed out after a year (too much partying and vore), ended up working three gig jobs to make ends meet and not having the time to eat anyone.
Around 25, she met and started dating a sweet bank manager. They got married two years later and her spouse who could support Marcy while she went to technical school. Turns out she was good with her hands and enjoyed electrical work. That really turned things around for her, with a supportive spouse, a rewarding job, and new opportunities to occasionally eat ladies.
At age 35, Marcy finally prevailed and scheduled a breast reduction. She was somewhere in the L-cup range at this point. They got in the way so much and the back pain was getting so bad. There was a final goodbye weekend of debauchery and Marcy used them one last time to attract another woman to their bed and her stomach. She never did get that reduction, though -- the next morning after the aforementioned partying, Marcy was standing naked on their hotel balcony, watching the sunrise over the Gulf, when an unusually large pelican flew down, ate her up, and flew off. Her spouse saw the whole thing from inside their hotel room, but it was too fast for them to do anything about it.
Marcy being devoured was not unusual for this world, but it still saddened her spouse and the entire Talmadge Electric team. She was also missed at the local pickleball courts, where she had been a feature for a few years. Her final bodycount as a predator was 43 women.
Posted by Kingofblades 2 years ago Report
Holy I didn't expect a response, thank you very much
Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report
::thumbs up emoji::
Posted by Restrogenic 5 years ago Report
Im surprised they were all so willing and accepting of it.