Woah, way too much happening way too fast! I know I do enjoy a quicker paced story, but I had trouble keeping up most of the time.
I will say that I liked where things ended up going though. A showdown with June was inevitable, and I even anticipated a sexy one at that. I am curious to find out more about June's powers and how the two woman will interact now that they share one body now.
Haha, sorry, I get impatient with my endings. I appreciate all of the comments though, I'll definitely keep them in mind for my next stories. But this is the end of this series. I might continue it at some point in the future, but probably not in the near future.
Like I said, this wasn't a bad little story overall, it just had a few little things that a bit of editing would have probably picked up. You don't have to write a sequel or anything if there weren't originally any plans to do so. I'd be much more interested in seeing what new stuff you can come up with next if anything~
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Posted by Scion 14 years ago Report
Awwww yes, I love vore and people taking over other peoples bodies
Posted by anonymoussecake 14 years ago Report
I thought it would be a good way to end things =)
Posted by Rhysion 13 years ago Report
Woah, way too much happening way too fast! I know I do enjoy a quicker paced story, but I had trouble keeping up most of the time.
I will say that I liked where things ended up going though. A showdown with June was inevitable, and I even anticipated a sexy one at that. I am curious to find out more about June's powers and how the two woman will interact now that they share one body now.
Posted by anonymoussecake 13 years ago Report
Haha, sorry, I get impatient with my endings. I appreciate all of the comments though, I'll definitely keep them in mind for my next stories. But this is the end of this series. I might continue it at some point in the future, but probably not in the near future.
Posted by Rhysion 13 years ago Report
Like I said, this wasn't a bad little story overall, it just had a few little things that a bit of editing would have probably picked up. You don't have to write a sequel or anything if there weren't originally any plans to do so. I'd be much more interested in seeing what new stuff you can come up with next if anything~