"So, what does everypony think?" Hurst asked the circle of ponies and the baby dragon around him as he lowered the packet of two pieces of paper.
"I think it was good. You captured both my and Spike's personalities almost perfectly." Twilight said.
"Ah like that you were very describin' 'a stuff!" Applejack told him.
"Dear, you were right about the part where the mane pony was all wet... I nearly fainted when I *heard* it!" Rarity said.
"Eh, I think it would've been better if he had bucked that dragon right in the face!" Dash said, punching the air.
"A...at least he was ok at the end..." was Fluttershy's reply.
"It was very well thought out! Are you sure you weren't really actually eaten by a dragon?" Twilight asked, and the others also wanted to know.
Hurst just shook his head. "Nah... It's just a work of fiction, but another's in the works..."
"When?" they all wanted to know.
"Ummmmm... Later...." Said Hurst, but he didn't sound too sure...
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Posted by 48th agent 14 years ago Report
Hm, short and sweet...you actually captured that very well if you ask me. But, just as the girls did, I have to ask; when?
Heh, I hope Hurst gets a background story, I'm intregued enough!
Posted by Nibor 14 years ago Report
Hurst *has* a background story. Check out his picture in the "Other pictures" folder. It's there.
Posted by Nibor 14 years ago Report
s'cuse me *other characters* folder.
Posted by 48th agent 14 years ago Report
Alright, I see it, I just wasn't looking for it at first. Hm...this talk of characters is convincing me to post my own and (gasp) contribute to this community...what do I do?
Posted by Nibor 14 years ago Report
lol. Go for it!
Posted by 48th agent 14 years ago Report
Easy for you to say, you've already done it. I want you to convince me to do it.
Posted by Nibor 14 years ago Report
Here's what I used to make my pony. See if it can't help you think of something. It's got many choices.
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=pony+creator#/d3h5xck
Posted by 48th agent 14 years ago Report
Well, yeah, but ponycreator ponies always come out unnatural...at least it always seems that way...not the worst idea though...
Posted by Nibor 14 years ago Report
Just try it, ok?
Posted by 48th agent 14 years ago Report
I'll take a look, but I'd rather draw out something crappy than...rely on something to do it for me.
Posted by Nibor 14 years ago Report
your choice.
Posted by EeveeBelly 13 years ago Report
Ok, i guess, but with lazy write
Posted by Nibor 13 years ago Report
Why do you think my writing is lazy? Enlighten me.
Posted by EeveeBelly 13 years ago Report
Well, it was short. And the dragon was just there with no reason behind it.
Posted by Nibor 13 years ago Report
True. I'm sorry, I guess it *is* pretty short...