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This is an odd one for me. I've been checking out sites I normall don't, ie shrinking, aggressive vore, digestion, horror tales etc and this idea came to me. I don't like to mess with an idea just to fit my fantasies, I'd rather it worked right. I'd Rather it FELT right as I write it down. This one did. It's a typical revenge style vore with mild shrinking and growth where there is digestion, though not described. Enjoy.
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Posted by Throku 11 years ago Report
Very well done ;) I've always been very fond of your writing, but like you said in the beginning there's usually a lack of digestion, which so happens has become more or less a must for me. :/
All in all very well played, good background and a solid suspense of the disbelief. The only thing that bothered me was the typical set-up "bad-guy(girl) gets what's comming to them", with the plot is laid out and everything goes according to plan without a hitch.
I guess what I'm saying is tht I'd like to be surprised at least once in a story.
Posted by Gimlet 11 years ago Report
As I said, a pretty typical revenge vore tale. Nothing special about the setup, no great surprises. Not every tale has a twist. I guess that makes this more porn than Erotica... *shrugs* I did think of not explaining what was going on and doing it from Cassies point of view, explaining it later, maybe even while she was in the stomach... but I ended up doing it this way. Maybe next time I'll go the twilight zone route and have an ending that no-one expects (Except the Spanish Inquisition!)
Posted by Throku 11 years ago Report
Hmm...well I can't say I'm very fond of the tell-back stories from within the belly, those are a surefire way to kill any suspense.
I have to say this inquisition sounds intersting enough, I do suppose there are many forms of torture and even several ways to burn a witch...I don't know why I've been so hooked up on fire?
Posted by SooperWooper 11 years ago Report
Science! Sexy sexy science!
Posted by Gimlet 11 years ago Report
You are aware that most of that makes less sense than Trek technobabble? Sounds good but is about as close to quantum physics as a spell book *chuckles* fun to write though. I LIKE technobabble!
Posted by SooperWooper 11 years ago Report
Hey, it made more sense than the High School science books, so it's a win for me!
Posted by Rapanui 11 years ago Report
Ah! An excellent new story by Gimlet, I always enjoy your work. Lovely set-up and execution.
Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
Glad the bitch got what she deserved!
Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
I'm glad Cassie stayed bitchy throughout the whole story. It made hating her that much easier.
Posted by shabbacabba 11 years ago Report
In the name of SCIENCE! XD
Posted by joeburp22181 11 years ago Report
Would be cool to see a F/M story with winnie having sex with a male then swallowing him whole.