It has been a while since you have posted any of your stories on this site; close to five, maybe six years perhaps more. I must say though, you skills as a writer seemed to have improved over time.
Now that I am done stating the obvious, I'll finally comment on your story.
The story is very nicely detailed, it is not so overly detailed as to become stale, but just enough as to allow the readers to get a fairly good picture of what is going on in the story. The style of view during the vore scene is in one of my personal favorites when it comes to vore, it switches from the prey to that of the predator's during different parts of the action, that way it doesn't become that boring only reading about one person's experiences during the process of consumption. The premise of the story is a very interesting one, a being that is prolonging his own life by sacrificing the lives of others. I can't say much about the characters we haven't received enough information on them in order to make a fair judgement, so this will have to wait.
Yeah, it's definitely been a long while. Everytime I'd start writing something, I'd get sidetracked and lose interest in that particular story... and I was lazy. *Nods* Anyhow, thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ^_^
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Posted by Mcleod 13 years ago Report
It has been a while since you have posted any of your stories on this site; close to five, maybe six years perhaps more. I must say though, you skills as a writer seemed to have improved over time.
Now that I am done stating the obvious, I'll finally comment on your story.
The story is very nicely detailed, it is not so overly detailed as to become stale, but just enough as to allow the readers to get a fairly good picture of what is going on in the story. The style of view during the vore scene is in one of my personal favorites when it comes to vore, it switches from the prey to that of the predator's during different parts of the action, that way it doesn't become that boring only reading about one person's experiences during the process of consumption. The premise of the story is a very interesting one, a being that is prolonging his own life by sacrificing the lives of others. I can't say much about the characters we haven't received enough information on them in order to make a fair judgement, so this will have to wait.
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Posted by TigerClaw 13 years ago Report
Yeah, it's definitely been a long while. Everytime I'd start writing something, I'd get sidetracked and lose interest in that particular story... and I was lazy. *Nods* Anyhow, thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ^_^