Surfing the Web
By NewYorkRod -- Report
This is part one of a four part story. To get the rest of the story, leave a comment telling me what you think of the story. I will send you the other parts in a PM. Try to tell me more than just "Nice." I need to know what people like so I can craft my writing and drawings toward your preferences. Thanks,
NewYorkRod
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Posted by Gypa 13 years ago Report
This story has an intresting pointental and a set-up as I did like to read the rest, the intro is fine and you soon get intrested to know what happens, so I did like to find out more.
At least I hope the spider is semi-human, as I think that would be more hotter than if the spider was just your reglular spider.
Posted by NewYorkRod 13 years ago Report
A great idea. it would make the vore much less messy. Thanks for the great idea.
Posted by Gignova 13 years ago Report
Looks good so far, can't wait for part 2. :)
Posted by giblieherps 13 years ago Report
I wonder if you should have introduced the characters a little bit more before the first girl got stuck.
Also i love spiders that swallow I hope this has one :)
Posted by sportscarfan18 12 years ago Report
This is good so far. Maybe once they get digested they become part of the spiders silk so they can be added to the web for the next victims. Have them find out the web is actually past victims of the spider!!! That would really spook the characters!!!
Posted by fntrdy2001 11 years ago Report
I would like to know how this stories will end
Posted by twobee 10 years ago Report
Interesting story. I have always like spider vore as a theme, the helplessness of the prey turns me on