You've got a lot of extra and misplaced periods and Parenthesise in your story.... but I can only assume the trouble you're having where you are is making it difficult to type properly :P
Asty better be careful how much of The Mother's fluids she has squirted into her cause at the worst she'll end up being converted into a Legionnaire or on the other hand, she might end up with something else happening inside her :3
What you said is right,thanks to the progams I am using it causes the lots of extra and misplace periods and parenthesise, however once I am back home I will reup load the chapters again. As Asty better be careful from the Mother, I won't be worry for that Asty has a little secret of her own.well there will be a little suprise of that ;) later in the chapters.
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Posted by Firstfate 13 years ago Report
You've got a lot of extra and misplaced periods and Parenthesise in your story.... but I can only assume the trouble you're having where you are is making it difficult to type properly :P
Asty better be careful how much of The Mother's fluids she has squirted into her cause at the worst she'll end up being converted into a Legionnaire or on the other hand, she might end up with something else happening inside her :3
Posted by Mid_Night 13 years ago Report
What you said is right,thanks to the progams I am using it causes the lots of extra and misplace periods and parenthesise, however once I am back home I will reup load the chapters again. As Asty better be careful from the Mother, I won't be worry for that Asty has a little secret of her own.well there will be a little suprise of that ;) later in the chapters.