Archive > French_snack > Vore stories > Various > Felarya > Topping the food chain - part 2
Expand
Add to favorites | Full Size | Download
< < Previous   Next > >
Topping the food chain - part 2 By French_snack -- Report

Uploaded: 7 years ago

Views: 3,080

File size: 172.69 KiB

MIME Type: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document

Comments: 6

Favorites: 14

Crisis belongs to Karbo, as does the world of Felarya itself.

Jade, Jora and Tanny belong to Ravana3k, as does Safe Harbour.

Elli belongs to TheWiking2000.

Other characters are my own.

What happens to characters here is, of course, with permission from their respective owners.

Comment on Topping the food chain - part 2

Please login to post a comment.

Comments
Krauser

Posted by Krauser 7 years ago Report

I very much liked this story, and I was glad to see all these different characters interact like that - and the vore of course. I wonder if any of these predators will change their views on humans / prey? I don't think I've ever seen that in a story. They are always on one side before the story begins.

Can't wait to see more.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thank you. Well, Milly probably enjoys humans too much to change her ways; Isham tried to change her, unsuccessfully. She may feel a little uncomfortable eating them for a while, but the discomfort is likely to pass.

As for Jora and Elli, they're not my characters, of course.

MagicOddEffect

Posted by MagicOddEffect 7 years ago Report

This is extremely well-written. The interactions between characters are top-notch.
I always like your Felarya stories. They portray things in a realistic fashion; it's as if you've been there.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thank you very much. I do try to make it as "realistic" as can be in such a fantasy setting.

vore111

Posted by vore111 7 years ago Report

good story!!
especially the samesize part even though i wouldn't want that happen to milly :p but you got nice new ideas the last tow felarya stories i like them both .

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 7 years ago Report

Thank you.