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Seeds of Desire

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A story about two guys with a deep fondness for vore. I was very inspired to write this after chatting with Cryptrat, whom I can't thank enough for his input!

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Marked

Posted by Marked 13 years ago Report

*Starts the slow clap*

Oh now this is good. I wasn't sure if I liked it at first, especially since a realistic description of eating animals like that is kinda "Uncanny Valley" territory for me, but I'm glad I got past that. I've seen stories that deal with the themes of reality vs fantasy before, but never seen one that invokes such questions without spending ages retreading the issue. I loved how you said "these characters already made their choices, move on." And damn this is a pretty hot story. I've somehow never seen a 7-inch micro before, I absolutely love it; it's just on the upper limit of what someone could maybe swallow, and I imagine it would give the pred a much more satisfaction. Digs into the pleasure of swallowing a cock... except so much better! "Predatory nirvana"? I couldn't think of a better phrase for the feeling. Bonus points for the thumbnail art, it ties in quite nicely with the story!

Bannor

Posted by Bannor 13 years ago Report

Thank you for the comments! I'm glad you got past the 'little animals' part, and I knew that there might be some blowback from writing about that - but when a story involves human vore, I decided I could assume a more realistic buildup (no animals were harmed in the writing of this story!).

The seven-inch size has always been closer to what I fantasize about because of the degree of physical contact between the two involved. Extreme micro seems to diminish a lot of that, in my opinion (not knocking it, just stating a preference).

Thanks again! :3

4ofSwords

Posted by 4ofSwords 13 years ago Report

Nicely written, Bannor! I agree with Marked; I think you did a really good job of probing into the fantasy vs. reality fuzzy area. So, two thumbs up from me! :)

Bannor

Posted by Bannor 13 years ago Report

Thank you so much! Coming from an established writer as yourself, this makes me all fuzzy inside! :3

4ofSwords

Posted by 4ofSwords 13 years ago Report

Oh, and I forgot to mention - sperm-activated magic potions are the best! And they make sense!

Bannor

Posted by Bannor 13 years ago Report

Makes sense and it's fun! Admittedly, my favorite go-to method when size becomes a barrier. :3

Guzame

Posted by Guzame 13 years ago Report

Oh my, I liked this story a lot.

I think there are a lot of voraphiles that have this desire on some level or another, and I enjoy how you didn't do away with the fatality that's involved with living out this fantasy.

I hope to see more of these kind of stories from you!

Bannor

Posted by Bannor 13 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :3

The fatality aspect is something I assume will turn some people off, if the various comments I see in the forum areas are any indication. Reforming and whatnot appears to be popular, although it's not a means of vore that I personally care for. The fetish (or fantasy) - for me - will always take the logical conclusion of digestion.

I hadn't planned on doing more vore stuff for awhile, but my imagination has been going nuts lately, so there might be another story in the near-ish future. :3

Cryptrat

Posted by Cryptrat 13 years ago Report

Hmmmm... Interesting story you've written. *goes to check if the potion seller is back from vacation yet* >:D

Bannor

Posted by Bannor 13 years ago Report

Call me when you get the potion. I'll be right over!! :3

Guzame

Posted by Guzame 13 years ago Report

Save me one of those potions too!