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Two girls, one a giantess Neko, the other a human, go onto a webcam show to try and make some money, a high paying bidder turns things interesting
Posted by delet0h2b69 11 years ago Report
So will she make it?
Posted by Ginbug 11 years ago Report
I decided since I was writing this for vore fans specifically I would leave the ending open ending so there could be several implied endings. In my own mind she does make it. Probably not very happy with her friend though.
Posted by delet0h2b69 11 years ago Report
That's what I implied :) and I do enjoy those suspenseful endings. I'm glad she's okay ^_^
Posted by Fyr3 9 years ago Report
I would actually like to request that ending written. I really like the way you had them interact, and would like to see it done your way
Posted by theheadsn 11 years ago Report
Loved the story, great idea :) but just my two cents - it just ended, more then it had an open ending. I thought at first you forgot a sentence or two lol
Posted by Ginbug 11 years ago Report
The open ending was intentional so that the reader could sort of just infer what they want to the fate of the human. In my preference and mind she is let out, but some people may prefer the idea of fatal vore so I let it go.
Posted by theheadsn 11 years ago Report
I completely understand, and I actually like that sometimes :) it can work very well. I was just saying that the way it was written, it looks like it just ends mid paragraph
Posted by Magaso 11 years ago Report
I rather enjoyed the way these two interacted.
Posted by oishi1 11 years ago Report
I really like the gradual shift from safe and within their comfort zone to dangerous and questionable and their slow compliance. You wrote it sensually enough and drew the audience along with them. The emotional aspect was very well done. The only criticism I have is if I had to see the words "she bit her lip" again I would lose my immersion in the story. Very well written and enjoyable, though. It didn't have any slow spots or pointless filler.
Posted by Ginbug 11 years ago Report
thanks, and yeah this was sorta a first draft so I haven't scanned it for repetition or other mistakes I might have missed over a few glances over XD. Thanks for the comment!
Posted by alockwood1 2 months ago Report
Interesting.