Wow! Great segment. I can see that you are letting the momentum to build slowly. Did I say slowly? Glacial. But that’s fine. I like character development thru back stories. It means more in a consensual story line of this bent because it adds eroticism to each character’s demise, their dénouement, as it were.
Posted by lorenzo64 11 years ago Report
Wow! Great segment. I can see that you are letting the momentum to build slowly. Did I say slowly? Glacial. But that’s fine. I like character development thru back stories. It means more in a consensual story line of this bent because it adds eroticism to each character’s demise, their dénouement, as it were.
Posted by MagicianXV 11 years ago Report
Heh...well, I DID say it was going to be a longer story. ^_^;