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Rose's 2nd prey on the day of her High School graduation.
If you have any con-crit it would be very much appreciated. Thanks :)
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Posted by rugli 11 years ago Report
That was pretty nice read :)
Posted by VoraciousRose 11 years ago Report
Thank you :)
Posted by Arielomnom 11 years ago Report
Really liked both stories. Keep up the good work! :)
Posted by VoraciousRose 11 years ago Report
Thank you
Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report
I like how she takes off the shoes of her prey.
A very enjoyable story.
Posted by VoraciousRose 11 years ago Report
Haha yeah the idea of eating shoes just doesn't sound very yummy, so she takes the shoes off any of her prey if they're wearing them at the time.
Thank you by the way :)
Posted by EvaUnit13 10 years ago Report
I really like these stories....but i think the thing you need to work on....is length mostly. details alright...but i'd have preferred it to be longer mostly.