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Rarity's Delight By Hermlover21 -- Report

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Rarity may seem like a normal Unicorn but she has devious and delicious fetish.
(This was written in the course of about 45 minutes while i was drinking. If you like and would like to see more stories like this please leave a comment below suggesting who she should eat next.)

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marader4

Posted by marader4 7 years ago Report

This is odd, and not quite whether to say continue or not

miranda_dragon

Posted by miranda_dragon 7 years ago Report

I rather liked the idea and tone here.

But, I think it would be worthwhile to give it a few passes for cleanup. Lots of grammatical issues throughout.

Hermlover21

Posted by Hermlover21 7 years ago Report

Now that I'm sober and not hiding from the sun I'll probably end up doing so.

Speisenkarte

Posted by Speisenkarte 7 years ago Report

Who's next?

Dracon_Kitsune

Posted by Dracon_Kitsune 7 years ago Report

Hmm, might I suggest Applejack next?

sportscarfan18

Posted by sportscarfan18 6 years ago Report

You should have her eat twilight sparkle next.

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 3 years ago Report

I wish this had continued, it had so much potential and other than a few errors, was written great.

sevensix

Posted by sevensix 1 year ago Report

Thanks for granting that wish for the rest of us.

VoraciousShapeshift

Posted by VoraciousShapeshift 1 year ago Report

You're welcome, writing it is fun. I intend to formally check in here once I take care of some things that have piled up over the near-month without the internet, and then get some writing done!