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A request by Readasaur. =3 Kanji eats Yosuke.
This all happened in the course of basically 2 days. Writing it, I mean. I wrote it all in 2 days cause I gotta get so much stuff done. So sorry if it's a bit below par of my usual stuff.
Posted by Readasaur 10 years ago Report
This was wonderful!
Thank you very very much!
Did you enjoy writing it?
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Posted by Frost Bite 10 years ago Report
Yeah, it was really nifty, and I've been wanting to do something with the guys from Persona for a while. =)
It was also something of an experiment to see if I could do a vore story that concentrated more on the eating, without having to have the sex help carry it halfway, since I figured that was definitely something I needed to work on. =)
Thanks for the idea, and I hope you enjoyed reading it.
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Posted by Readasaur 10 years ago Report
I liked how you portrayed Kanji being overcome by hunger, and that he actually considered Yosuke's whimpers to be cute towards the end, there. It meant that Kanji's fixation on cute things overcame his hunger for just a moment, which was a nice touch.
From the way you phrased the question in the comment below "Locker Room Meal", I guessed that you wanted to write a story that focused more on the food aspect than the sexual aspect. I'm glad we could both be pleased by the result. ^__^
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Posted by BlueKnight 10 years ago Report
I'm not one for M/M, and this story hasn't changed that...But I will say you've done well with this one; story, formatting, characters, etc.
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Posted by SleepyFighter 4 months ago Report
Coming back to read this story gives me the feeling that Kanji as a pred is underrated. You've certainly gave him the charm of one in this story and it's still good after 10 years.
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