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Persona 4: Kanji's first taste By Frost Bite

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A request by Readasaur. =3 Kanji eats Yosuke.

This all happened in the course of basically 2 days. Writing it, I mean. I wrote it all in 2 days cause I gotta get so much stuff done. So sorry if it's a bit below par of my usual stuff.

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Readasaur

Posted by Readasaur 5 years ago

This was wonderful!
Thank you very very much!
Did you enjoy writing it?

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Frost Bite

Posted by Frost Bite 5 years ago

Yeah, it was really nifty, and I've been wanting to do something with the guys from Persona for a while. =)

It was also something of an experiment to see if I could do a vore story that concentrated more on the eating, without having to have the sex help carry it halfway, since I figured that was definitely something I needed to work on. =)

Thanks for the idea, and I hope you enjoyed reading it.

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Readasaur

Posted by Readasaur 5 years ago

I liked how you portrayed Kanji being overcome by hunger, and that he actually considered Yosuke's whimpers to be cute towards the end, there. It meant that Kanji's fixation on cute things overcame his hunger for just a moment, which was a nice touch.

From the way you phrased the question in the comment below "Locker Room Meal", I guessed that you wanted to write a story that focused more on the food aspect than the sexual aspect. I'm glad we could both be pleased by the result. ^__^



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BlueKnight

Posted by BlueKnight 5 years ago

I'm not one for M/M, and this story hasn't changed that...But I will say you've done well with this one; story, formatting, characters, etc.

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