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Lucia certainly complicated her college life when she released a demon from a ouija board her friends goaded her into toying with. The demon, who went by the name of Rohann, took the young woman's innocence, invaded her home, and claimed her like a possession.
Months later, Lucia has almost adapted to and even become secretly thrilled about the presence of the demon that awaits her every evening...
That is, until one night when she comes home at a very late hour, much to the displeasure of an impatient Rohann.
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Posted by Kitti 10 years ago Report
Gah, pardon me. ;;
My stupid enter key had to go and get in the way. lsdghf;lsgadfgag.
I love your style, dear!
dis story tho. me likes~
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Oh my gosh! Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story (and my writing style)! :3
Posted by StrawberryStereo 10 years ago Report
Aww I loved your characters but I was hoping for a nonfatal. In the back of my mind I knew it would be fatal from the start but I was hoping =.='! Poor Luce!
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Sorry about that. ^^; I'm glad that you liked the characters, though! If you want to view it as non-fatal, just disregard the last few paragraphs and imagine your own ending. XD
Posted by Ephriam 10 years ago Report
This is really nice, haha. I liked it.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :D
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
*cackle* Awesome. I loved this. TOTALLY MY STYLE. There were some wonderful gems in here, such as his throat bending her to his will; and the showy, sensual licking of his teeth and tongue (I love that).
The sex was incredible. It was the perfect balance of erotic and smutty. I much liked Rohann, too. He's a riot. And Luce was defiant and adorable.
I like your writing style -- which, is to say you HAVE one (: Which is a wonderful thing. I can't wait to see it evolve and grow.
It's great being able to read M/F that aligns so perfectly with my interests too (: <3
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Yay! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! (And flattered, since I enjoy your works so much.) I'm glad you found it to your liking. I do tend to draw things out, be it sexual situations, interactions, and now extending to vore scenes, too. I love detailing in general. It gives more 'meat' to the story (pun intended).
I'm growing a little attached to these two, though they aren't largely fleshed out characters or anything. Perhaps one day they will be. XD And I'm fully guilty of enjoying erotic elements in writing. I used to think of it as a challenge when I wasn't accustomed to writing it, but now I find it one of the most fun things to write.
Wow, that makes me really happy to hear! There's always room for growth and I'm sure that I have a lot to do. XD Hobby or not, I like to work towards improvement.
Hehe, I could say that right back at you, too! :D
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
Fleshed out characters you say? I can /totally/ picture Rohann sitting in a wide, sumptuous leather arm chair, in a smoking jacket, with silk slippers on, puffing away on a pipe as he watches the fire burn contently in the fireplace; smooth jazz playing in the background LOL
As for drawing things out? That's what makes the scene! Linger with it, luxuriate over it, caress it, tease it, tempt it -- the build up is just as important as the act -- be it sex, or vore -- it not more.
Details will always be your friend (: It's what makes everything more delicious
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Ahahaha, oh man. I'm tempted to try my hand at drawing that (though when it comes to backgrounds via drawing, they are my nemesis (aside from hands). I suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck at them). It sounds like it would suit him very nicely.
I agree completely! Writing itself is an art as much as it is a form of expression. Story-telling is an amazing thing. (But I'm sure I don't need to tell you that. XD)
Posted by Dragonic_Wolf 10 years ago Report
This is so so so so so very. Very very very very good ararghhhhh damn it the perfection. I love the characters, and unwillingness, and fatality really seals the deal for what i love.
Great writing and great story...
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Wow, thank you very much! I don't think it's anywhere near perfection, but I appreciate the compliment! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it so much! :D
Posted by Darius1972 10 years ago Report
Wow, I have been away too long. I've been missing your talented writing and artwork.
Allow me to first compliment you on your dark little tale of ravaged innocence and demons. Beautifully constructed with nicely developed characters and a dark plot that pits this Lucia against this ass of a demon Rohann.
The brutality he shows her as he ravages her again and again, all the while degrading and terrorizing her....delicious!
The vore scene, nicely described from both perspectives. I must say, I was a fan of soft vore exclusively until I met Nephilim (bows down to my idol and corrupter who I can now hear cackling when she sees this LOL). Same goes for M/F, (again Nephilim). I see some of her in you with your dark style that doesn't end with the prey tucking into a cozy little corner of the pred's stomach for a nice winter's nap. I like the sheer dominance Rohann exhibits over Lucia, and the final breaking and consumption of her spirit and physical body.
Beautifully written, I look forward to seeing more of your writings.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Wow, thanks a lot! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I shamefully really enjoy plots like these, instead of more wholesome stuff. (Not that I would necessarily say this is a wholesome fetish to begin with. XD)
I definitely favor the dark side of things, even long before I came here. Nephie introduced me to hard!vore, which I commonly did not like, but her stories were absolutely captivating and I have a bigger tolerance for hard!vore now than I used to (at least when it's that well done).
Glad to hear that you enjoyed the story, though. :) I don't know when I will be writing more of this nature again, but we'll see.
Posted by TootCore 10 years ago Report
Quite an enjoyable story, very well written, too. Keep it up, you're awesome !
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Thanks a lot! :) Glad you enjoyed the story!
Posted by TootCore 10 years ago Report
You're very welcome.
I however couldn't get this silly GIF out of my mind while reading it, for some reason, which made it quite a strange experience.
Posted by Chameleonette 10 years ago Report
Lmfao XD
Posted by TootCore 10 years ago Report
:p
Posted by TootCore 10 years ago Report
Damnit, BBcode doesn't work in the comments. :c
Posted by RisingMoon336 9 years ago Report
I hope this isn't over. I think there is a seriously fine example of Stockholm syndrome, and how she is secretly thrilled by his domineering attitude, and although he is a self centered ass. I suspect he wouldn't want to lose his precious succulent flower forever. Please tell me there will be more. There is so much potential for shenanigans and sexual exploration between these two. I particularly want to see what happens when he finds his obsession with her might actually be something more.
Posted by Chameleonette 9 years ago Report
Sorry to disappoint you, but this is all that I really intend to do with this story. It's possible down the line that I could be inspired at some point, so I won't count it out completely, but I don't want to give you any false hopes, either.
I'm a lot more invested in my new teacher/student vore story, I'm afraid. That one is ongoing and will be exploring a lot of sex and vore in it. I have five chapters of it written already (though only one posted so far), and that's where all of my inspiration and motivation have been flowing.
Again, my apologies, but I can't make any promises regarding this story.
Posted by Hariken 9 years ago Report
Wonderful! It makes me wonder if you do story commissions, too.
Posted by Chameleonette 9 years ago Report
Thank you!
Haha, I hadn't considered it before. Are story commissions really a thing?
Posted by Hariken 9 years ago Report
You're welcome.
Kinda-sorta. I tried to see if I could get people to commission a story from me but no one took the offer up.
Posted by ZaaZaa 8 years ago Report
Oh. Oh my.
This is horribly erotic. Time for a cold shower.
Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report
Haha, well, glad you enjoyed! Sorry for any trouble it caused. lol