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I'm back, bitches~
ATTENTION, READERS: This story is a monster and I'm gonna need help finishing it. I think there will be three parts, but ultimately the fates of these girls are up to you, dear readers!
Comment for suggestions! If I like it, it will happen! For example, Emperor_Palpatine requested pregnant prey. And look! BAM. It's happening. And I shall make it delicious.
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Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 10 years ago Report
Oh! Pregnant prey! You are awesome and I hope you eat many tasty preyses~
Posted by tangent 10 years ago Report
Hehe, thanks :D
Posted by StrawberryStereo 10 years ago Report
Oh let the cat girl live somehow >.< I like her!
Maybe something like...Esurenti eats all 3 of em'. Then he fights with Ambrosia as she tries to convince him to let the pregnant one go so he gets angry and eats her too (with the intention of letting her out), but while inside his belly Ambrosia pities the catgirl, who is crying after seeing the other two perish and tries to calm her. She finds the key in Esurenti's stomach and hooks her collar onto the catgirl instead. When Esurenti attempts to pull out Ambrosia he mistakenly pulls out the catgirl and is forced to cough up Ambrosia. Amused by the extreme Ambrosia went to to save her cat-friend, even risking her own life, Esurenti lets her keep the catgirl(a pet for company? slave? courtier?) but insists that he will eat her any moment he feels like, when Ambrosia annoys him, or until his amusement runs dry.
Okay that was a very detailed suggestion >.< just some ideas!
Posted by Kc0dawnte 10 years ago Report
I second this idea.
Posted by tangent 10 years ago Report
Oh my, oh my! Thank you for the idea! I certainly like the sound of this! And don't ever apologize for an in-depth suggestion. This is exactly the kind of response I value most.
...Although I'm in an awfully dark mood, so I can't guarantee the catgirl will live for long... ;D
Posted by Kc0dawnte 10 years ago Report
I'd love to see the Demon Prince swallow his prized lady friend. Maybe have the chain tampered with and break. Try and corrupt her into a demon. Or even have her get intimate with a slave and he eats both, but only saves her.
Posted by tangent 10 years ago Report
Thanks for the suggestion! I will definitely incorporate that into later stories, but for now the focus will be on the slaves rather than Ambrosia. If you wanna see her swallowed, check out the story before this, hehe.
Posted by jackel 10 years ago Report
I'm not very imaginative but I'm always satisfied with Esurenti devouring up anyone/everyone. Hope the writing goes well! :)
Posted by tangent 10 years ago Report
D'aww, thank you! Part d'eux is up, so lemme know what you think. ;3