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A short vore story about an adventurous young man and a hungry female centaur.
This is my first work here on Eka's Portal. All criticism is greatly welcomed, as I am trying to write professionally.
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Posted by NextBowlMovement 10 years ago Report
Awesome ^^
Posted by bela 10 years ago Report
Delicious kissing. Effective contrast in attitude between Jeremy and his admirer.
Posted by Bright 10 years ago Report
Nice description of the kissing.
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
The last line is perfect. :3
Posted by darksign13 10 years ago Report
I also thought that my ending was my strongest point. It would be hard to call any vore story's ending "happy", but I felt that wrapping it up nicely made the whole story feel lighter and more well-rounded.
Posted by UserMan90 4 years ago Report
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