Utterly transfixed by the display, the spell only broke when he felt a tightening hardness between his legs, Snapping his head down in horror, Tuck saw the Tree of Life standing proud and tall between his legs.
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LOL! Classic.
Still his erection persisted. “Naked mole rat sex,” Tuck muttered, closing his eyes, “Two fat, hairless, pink little bastards porking each other in a cold rain.
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OMG IT GETS BETTER! *cackles* Well played.
Wow. That was a great twist; great ending. I am fast falling in love with Vana. She's so uniquely unhinged. An incredibly interesting character.
I love how you used the shotgun over the mantelpiece, too; we now know why you included the salesmen (with such great cheeky humor) with his little translator box.
Posted by Genowing 10 years ago Report
I am so Loving this series!
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
I have no idea where this story is going, but I love it so much <3 <3 <3 Keep writing!!
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
Utterly transfixed by the display, the spell only broke when he felt a tightening hardness between his legs, Snapping his head down in horror, Tuck saw the Tree of Life standing proud and tall between his legs.
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LOL! Classic.
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
Still his erection persisted. “Naked mole rat sex,” Tuck muttered, closing his eyes, “Two fat, hairless, pink little bastards porking each other in a cold rain.
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OMG IT GETS BETTER! *cackles* Well played.
Posted by nephilim 10 years ago Report
Wow. That was a great twist; great ending. I am fast falling in love with Vana. She's so uniquely unhinged. An incredibly interesting character.
I love how you used the shotgun over the mantelpiece, too; we now know why you included the salesmen (with such great cheeky humor) with his little translator box.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 4 years ago Report
“Step into my parlor,” said the vixen to the mouse.
That is such a great line to me for some reason.
Posted by Littledude 4 years ago Report
Foreshadowing. Thought it was corny when I wrote it at the time. But thank you!