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The Boy Who Cried Wolf - TWIOTB (F/M) By the_Wolf -- Report

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2012
My TWIOTB take on the classic fable. I wrote two variations on this one; they start the same and then diverge when the action gets going.
This one is the F/M version.

E-reader friendly versions now available on Smashwords if you want to take this story to bed or support the author: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/411983

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the_Wolf: Comments are always appreciated, and I'm happy to hear if something I made got you off. :)
Actual, thoughtful critiques are also very welcome.
Petulant insults or rambling diatribes will be deleted and the offender blocked. There is no tolerance for stupid/rude.

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RisingMoon336

Posted by RisingMoon336 7 years ago Report

Awwww. That was kind of sad. I thought he would have just given himself to her considering his life wasn't so great. What a terrible way to end something that seemed genuine. The saddest part though, is that she didn't feel anything for him. Half of love is just low. What's more is that the special moment they had, she was just going to do to someone else. Such a tragic tale

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the_Wolf

Posted by the_Wolf 7 years ago Report

Well, I was going partially for that sense of the tragic, as well as people that like this sort of predator. In the end, it's just who this character was, manipulating to get a better meal and only caring enough to make sure he didn't suffer.
Not sure if you still liked the overall story or not, but if you prefer generally lighter fare, you might like my "Studs for Supper" series a bit better.

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joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 7 years ago Report

Brilliant, love a story when the prey actually thinks they can be saved or let go but then find out their pred actually had no plans of letting them go in the first place.

At the beginning, was a cool way to see the tale of The Boy Who Cried Wolf's watcher leave and ignore him. The whole story being 'the boy who cried wolf', only makes since to me that he ended up digested inside, since the title wasn't 'a boy who changed in to a wolf'.

Nicely done story,

Man alive,

I would love to be her prey!

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the_Wolf

Posted by the_Wolf 7 years ago Report

Thanks, glad you liked this one so much. :) Hopefully I wind up coming up with a few more female characters that you wouldn't mind feeding. ;)

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joeburp22181

Posted by joeburp22181 7 years ago Report

Would love to see that!

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fatbelly

Posted by fatbelly 7 years ago Report

I like your writings. Though this one does have a bit of a sad ending I at least like the fact that she cared enough about him as to not let him suffer. While he was inside her she could've let her acids melt him down painfully, but no she took a higher road. Good story.

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the_Wolf

Posted by the_Wolf 7 years ago Report

Thanks very much! Glad you enjoy this one for those factors. :) Hope you continue to like the other stuff I write.

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Argh

Posted by Argh 6 years ago Report

Such an amazing story. I love trickster predators, and this is the perfect outcome: a fattened meal that goes down enthusiastically. I only wish there's been some epilogue of how much she'd gained from such a large feast!

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