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What are we now, little one? In their lonely watchtower, Damian and Alex's confront each other and themselves, sadistic predator and tortured preything curiously united by their psychoses. But of course, there are darker tones to delve...

FINALLY. Oh my gods, I've made you wait for this. I am sorry. It's been a hard few months, and also this has been without doubt some of the most difficult and challenging writing I have ever attempted. The end result is imperfect, of course, but I hope it keeps you with it along for the ride.

I am open to any and all comments, and delight in them. They are my preciouses.

Contains: Anthro Arctic fox cuddling Despair Digestion domination Emotional Fantasy Fox Furry Goldeneye graphic Gryphon misery Sadistic snuggling Swallowing torture Unwilling Vore

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TheGuyWhoKnows: Feel free to say anything about this. Love it, hate it, want it, want to KILL it, think it would be better with an enormous picture of Godzilla in the corner, think it would be better with Godzilla himself in the corner...whatever. I'm delighted to hear from you.

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AuronFox

Posted by AuronFox 5 years ago Report

It's not even 6 AM over here in NC and my day's already been made. Your writing style is astounding.
This story intrigues me to no end! I'm loving the focus on Damien's character; I feel for the big feathery sociopath. You make an immortal sadistic gryphon seem so... vulnerable!
Also, no need for you to be sorry about the wait. Take your time to get your ideas worded the way you want them to be, and continue to weave this delicious tale of yours together!

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TheGuyWhoKnows

Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 5 years ago Report

Hee. Well, I'm pleased it took such high priority on your schedule. Damian would have waited... but there's no time for suffering quite like the present.

Yep, Damian's different presentation was one of the main reasons for this chapter being so delayed. It's damn difficult to keep him the charming maniac he is and at the same time break down that persona... well, I'm glad the result was so interesting. Now, on to the next delicious tale...

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sd43

Posted by sd43 5 years ago Report

Well, for something you described as "not perfect", that was pretty fantastic. Such a change in Damian's character... I didn't see that coming, and now I have to look at him completely differently! Also, I feel like it might be a good idea for you to do some worldbuilding on Damian's home planet- just a suggestion.

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TheGuyWhoKnows

Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 5 years ago Report

Tee hee. It was very satisfying to break him down for once. Alex probably found a tiny bit of enjoyment in it as well. Maybe. Possibly he was just too traumatised. But I'm pleased and a little relieved that the twist came so unexpectedly - I've been feeling like every time I speak to someone on a story thing which has not yet been revealed I have the secret in big flashing lights on my metaphorical forehead.

As for Damian's home universe... mmm, maybe, although it's absolutely disconnected from this one and won't actually bear any real relevance beyond how it's influenced the big featherhead. The two suns I did entirely because it was cool. x3

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tangent

Posted by tangent 5 years ago Report

Ah, such lovely character development!!! I really love the concept of inflicting all the pain and sadistic urges onto one being instead of millions. In a way, this makes every ordeal between Alex and Damian poetic and beautiful on top of the (already so well done) type of intimate sadism that is guaranteed to make me squirm. Very inspirational stuff, man. I feel the fanart urge arising...

On an unrelated note, I can't seem to get the voice of Jeremy Irons out of my head whenever Damian speaks. Oh god...

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TheGuyWhoKnows

Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 5 years ago Report

Every ordeal between Alex and Damian is already poetic and beautiful, thank you very much! Just because Damian sometimes imagines that it saves many many more from his own desires doesn't mean it wasn't the most perfect relationship ever to exist... Ahem. Yes, intimidate sadism. Best kind of sadism ever. I must do more of it. I wish the fanart urge all the best in rising - I still love those wonderful pictures. No-one's quite got Damian's roguish playfulness quite like you have.

Oh, I can't even really imagine precisely how he sounds. But Jeremy Irons would be far, far from my last choice. An interesting idea... oh god now I'm starting to do it. D8

“Death? Of course, it is my stock in trade." Mmm, Jeremy...

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tangent

Posted by tangent 5 years ago Report

Hehehe. Just listen to his audiobook of Lolita. I'm sure that'll influence you even more. ;D

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