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An unexpected Threesome By Groblek

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This one was supposed to be a quick riff on the themes from my last story, "How Darryl met his Wife", but where the observer was the only one besides the unbirther not affected by her reality-bending. Then Portia decided not to unbirth the second person I'd intended for her, and Kelly acquired a personality. So, the threesome in the story was unexpected even to the author. :)

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DresdenQ

Posted by DresdenQ 4 years ago

This is fantastic! I love the detail and the story. I love the conflict and the resolution. Excellent.

Imrhys

Posted by Imrhys 4 years ago

Okay, now THAT was... wow, waayyyy not what I expected and damned cool for it! The fact she didn't betray Kelly nor have any accidents for "convenient" vore... beautiful ^^

For quick throw together that took on a life of its own on you, THAT was an incredible story. Me want more! *chuckles*

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 4 years ago

Heh, it wasn't what I expected either. Kelly was just supposed to be a prop, but she ended up with quite the strong personality, and a delightfully twisted one at that. Lisa's my viewpoint character, but Kelly's quickly becoming my favorite of the three. :)

This one took a turn towards the lighter side, so betrayal didn't even enter my mind once the trio got established. And I've been annoyed by the tendency for commercial stories to set up a love triangle and then force a choice between one love or the other, so this is my rebellion against that. :)

More is looking like a distinct possibility. I'd had one more variation on unbirth that didn't make it into the story, and when I couldn't sleep last night, I ended up with an outline continuing this rather a ways. The hard part will be actually getting it written.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 4 years ago

Heh, it wasn't what I expected either. Kelly was just supposed to be a prop, but she ended up with quite the strong personality, and a delightfully twisted one at that. Lisa's my viewpoint character, but Kelly's quickly becoming my favorite of the three. :)

This one took a turn towards the lighter side, so betrayal didn't even enter my mind once the trio got established. And I've been annoyed by the tendency for commercial stories to set up a love triangle and then force a choice between one love or the other, so this is my rebellion against that. :)

More is looking like a distinct possibility. I'd had one more variation on unbirth that didn't make it into the story, and when I couldn't sleep last night, I ended up with an outline continuing this rather a ways. The hard part will be actually getting it written.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 4 years ago

Heh, it wasn't what I expected either. Kelly was just supposed to be a prop, but she ended up with quite the strong personality, and a delightfully twisted one at that. Lisa's my viewpoint character, but Kelly's quickly becoming my favorite of the three. :)

This one took a turn towards the lighter side, so betrayal didn't even enter my mind once the trio got established. And I've been annoyed by the tendency for commercial stories to set up a love triangle and then force a choice between one love or the other, so this is my rebellion against that. :)

More is looking like a distinct possibility. I'd had one more variation on unbirth that didn't make it into the story, and when I couldn't sleep last night, I ended up with an outline continuing this rather a ways. The hard part will be actually getting it written.

Imrhys

Posted by Imrhys 4 years ago

Ohhhh now I'm interested in this variation of UB that didn't make it into this story.

And the fact Kelly turned out to be a kinkster of the vorish bent was delicious. Loved your in world reasoning for not turning this into convenient vore porn for everyone in world >_>

Yeah, I've been waking up with story stuff that just won't let me go and wants written NOW, lol. Three in a week now. That is more than I have written (not word count wise) than in the last 16, 18 months combined.

Mid_Night

Posted by Mid_Night 4 years ago

Nicely done.

but I think you need to t add F/F/F in tags.

I wonder when is the next chapter is ready?

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 4 years ago

According to the tagging guide, here that format is used to designate pred/prey relationships, so I'd read a tag of F/F/F as a nested unbirth or vore situation, which doesn't fit this story.

I'm glad you like it. I haven't got another chapter planned, but this one wasn't either, and I do like the characters, so who knows, they may turn up again.

Mid_Night

Posted by Mid_Night 4 years ago

hopefully I read more chapter for this story.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 4 years ago

Well, your comment got me inspired enough to at least rough out a longer story, so it might happen.

Mid_Night

Posted by Mid_Night 4 years ago

glad I help say if you need any help in generate ideas pm me.

F1reDem0n

Posted by F1reDem0n 4 years ago

Ya. I really liked it too. :D
Looking forward to another installment to the story.

F1reDem0n

Posted by F1reDem0n 4 years ago

For some odd reason when I try to open the downloaded DOC file in MS Word, it won't open. Something about a File Conversion.
You other stories open just fine, but not this one. Did you save if differently at all?

Thanks

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 4 years ago

Hmm, try renaming it to.docx and see if that helps. Otherwise, no idea.

F1reDem0n

Posted by F1reDem0n 4 years ago

Yep, that was the issue. I changed it from DOC to DOCX and that fixed it. Thanks. :D

Amberain

Posted by Amberain 4 years ago

If you are using Word 2003 or older you might need to download the compatability pack from microsoft. That's the only reason I've ever seen a file conversion message in word.