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When Rainbow dash learns that Applejack's birthday is coming up and that there's only one family recipe she hasn't tried, Rainbow gives her friend the greatest birthday gift she can, herself, for dinner.
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Posted by KaiserDunk 9 years ago Report
Wonderful fic; I like the fact that Rainbow Dash is a willing oven-roaster. You plan on doing any more MLP-themed cooking stories?
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 9 years ago Report
Maybe in the future yeah.
Posted by ViperBits 8 years ago Report
This is one of my favorite fics even despite the fact I'm not into anthro or humans. In fact, I think it is either #1 or #2 of my favorite vore stories.
I absolutely love RD's slow and gradual progression to becoming meat with multiple chances to stop and turn back along the way. I also love the sexy bits you've incorporated in the story! I always love to see privates and orgasms get some attention since vore is a sexual fetish after all.
The only thing that could make it better is if RD was a pony or at least had wings and maybe a tail. Cutting the tail right at the beginning after RD stopped subconsciously tucking and covering it away would be a nice touch. But more importantly, I would LOVE to see Twilight slowly pluck RD's wings feather-by-feather with RD knowing that soon she will become flightless and would never live to soar the skies again.
Ugh, how much I wish someone wrote a story like that or maybe just modified this masterpiece! RD is my fav pony and I want to see more stories like this with her... TheVisitorBlack, do you plan creating a remastered version of this glorious fic or just editing it? Or maybe writing something completely different? I doubt you'd go full-pony but it doesn't really matter as long as you make it as sexy as this one has been. Please, I beg you, we need more stories like this!
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 8 years ago Report
First off, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I have no plans on writing pony or anthro. However anyone who wishes to is free to write their own version, using however little or much of my original as they wish. I only ask that they credit me for the original (and if they use part of the original that they mention that as well), and that they link back to the story either here or on Hentai-Foundry.
Posted by BleedingRaindrops 8 years ago Report
Kinda bummed that they didn't stuff her ass as well, but hey, what are you gonna do?
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 8 years ago Report
I'm not really a fan of anal. It's very rare you'll see anything like that from me.
Posted by Ento 7 years ago Report
This is still a great story, love coming back to read it every now and then.
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 7 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoy it. I always try and write my longer stories so that they can be read repeatedly, it's nice to hear that someone is doing just that.
Posted by Shawpony 4 years ago Report
Will you write more of this
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 4 years ago Report
There are no plans to, I like where this ended. Sorry.