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Wendy and Meeta finally find a way out of the underground passage they've been trapped in, only to find that everything in this world seems to be hungry or looking to make a quick profit, and getting out doesn't necessarily mean they've reached safety.
I found myself with a brief window of time, so I decided to do my best to get something up. I ran out of time, so the ending is rushed, and I haven't had time to proofread, so this isn't my best work, but damn it, it's been a while since I posted something, so I wanted to get something up. I'll probably proof and update this at some point.
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Posted by bighead 9 years ago Report
Oooh, did not expect to see this on my notifications today. And that tag, mmmm, happy to see that one again. Really glad you've posted again.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I didn't expect to be able to post this. I ended up having a canceled trip this weekend and was able to produce a "quick" story that ended up being twice as long as I intended. Basically I kept writing until I hit the reverse full tour scene. And getting trapped in her butt happened because I remembered SOMEONE being disappointed that the previous such scene was so brief.
Posted by bighead 9 years ago Report
*shifty eyes*
Posted by Thanatos2k 9 years ago Report
I love this series.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! We're creeping up on the end of the plot. At that point, who knows what I'll do with these characters.
Posted by Skeiron 9 years ago Report
I liked it :)
The prey being able to feel what happens with the pred's body is not very common, so I'm glad it was featured here ^^
Looking forward to the next part!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks! This'll be the next series I continue, whenever that may be.
Posted by toolbox 9 years ago Report
nice to see you active again.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'll be sporadic around here, but a weekly or bi-weekly update isn't outside the realm of possibility now. Things in life have calmed down.