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nudist beach

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I don't know why it's taken me this long to write UB... Enjoy the lack of plot and general thoughtless smuttery.

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ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 12 years ago Report

Loved this. The simple mutual enjoyment, the finality, the amusement and cavalier acceptance of the world...

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 12 years ago Report

That was a fun and well-done scene. I'm not usually a fan of absorbtion through the womb, but this was an exception. I hope you write more UB sometime.

anonymous19999

Posted by anonymous19999 12 years ago Report

great work. love absorbtion. great vocabulary, maybe too exaggerated?

[Dinobonoid]

Posted by [Dinobonoid] 12 years ago Report

Gotta say, that was exceptionally well done. You even got a die-hard female prey fan like me to feel it.

tangent

Posted by tangent 12 years ago Report

haha, thanks. it probably only worked for you because all I usually do is female prey. takes one to know one ;D

jake110

Posted by jake110 12 years ago Report

oh man, that was amazing. although I'm rather curious, what picture did you use for the thumbnail?

tangent

Posted by tangent 12 years ago Report

thanks! and I don't know anymore. I just googled "anime pussy" until I found something I liked, hehe.

mojo-2131285

Posted by mojo-2131285 12 years ago Report

A female predator in a Tangent story? What inspired you to change things up?

Loved it btw.

tangent

Posted by tangent 12 years ago Report

ahh... I actually like female predators! I just tend to find them less realistic. women just aren't as horrible and violent as men, which is why the latter makes for such good killers. I am usually only down with pure sadistic heathenism, but I found myself in a silly, warm-horny sort of mood to write this. I still could never write a story about a cruel female.

and thanks c:

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 11 years ago Report

Agree with you on the non-violent part. I find it much easier (and more fun) to write stories about women being force fed against their will than just straight up eating people.

jaykayeight

Posted by jaykayeight 9 years ago Report

Its funny to read a story that is almost exactly how I imagined it! Well done!