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Here is my second drawing, i tried to go for a less common pose and a different angle this time, the head looks to big though.
Any way as always any advice is greatly appreciated and with that i hope you enjoy the drawing.
PS: to whoever uploaded my last drawing to derpibooru please dont do it again. Or atleast ask for my permission first, i hate dissapointing people and by having the picture removed i made a LOT of people sad so please ask first or dont do it at all thank you.
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Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
Derpy, Ugh
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
ugh? whats wrong with derpy?
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
I think she ate Rainbow Dash's Sister, Rarity's Sister and Applejack's Sister. I'll love to see how they respond
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
Well theres an idea for a picture right there, they cant be to happy i can tell you that.
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
They are not happy at all, I think those 3 ponies are going to go in order to avenge their Sisters.
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
Revolt against the derp!
Posted by AthleticDashie 9 years ago Report
yeah.
Order
1/Rainbow Dash avenging Scootaloo and also getting her revenge on Derpy.
2/Applejack Avenging Applebloom.
3/Rarity Avenging Sweetie Belle.
Posted by OakenChi 9 years ago Report
I like this one a lot :3
Your dialogue definitely adds a lot to your pictures, which is something that is sometimes hard to find in vore art.
As for the art itself, you've still got some rough bits to work on, but overall you seem to have a decent understanding of pony anatomy.
The only major flaws I can find in this, anatomy wise, are some of the proportions and shapes. Derpy's head seems to be a bit large compared to the rest of her body, which in turn makes her neck look a bit strange. Her foreleg also looks a bit thin and noodle-like, especially at the joint.
Other than that, everything else seems fine. There are a few minor rough areas here and there, but they should smooth out with more practice. Also, I should add, the belly looks fantastic, and Derpy's face is adorable.
Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more from you.
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
Aww, thanks a lot for the feedback.
A lot of the stuff you mentioned i had noticed but i couldn't do anything about it by that point unless i started again.
Next time i will take youre points into concideration and maybe try using a skeletal structure to get the proportions right, but again thanks a lot for the feedback it helps a lot.
Posted by OakenChi 9 years ago Report
Haha, I know how that goes. "To post or not to post" is a question I've asked myself a lot. But don't worry, just keep practicing and you'll get a feel for it.
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
Aww thanks a bunch again, and i will continue to do my best
Posted by Speisenkarte 9 years ago Report
Oh, Derpy
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
When will she learn
Posted by Battle541 9 years ago Report
I see Derpy is your favorite Pred?
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
yesh she is
Posted by Battle541 9 years ago Report
Cool. You going to make more?
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
I hope so.
Posted by Battle541 9 years ago Report
Cool
Posted by Aponymous 9 years ago Report
Hopefully they tasted like muffins.
Posted by CGR-7 9 years ago Report
Haha... oh Derpy, you silly filly, you. Still not knowing what went wrong. XD
Cute, Fox. Nicely done. =)
Posted by FoxKai 9 years ago Report
Aww thanks a bunch