Maybe, but who knows maybe acid bath is worth the pain when they stop feeling and its actually quite satisfying ending as hot dog girl's poop.
But kind shame though for Jess, that she didnt end inside Sai though, I would have thought it would have been more satisfying end for her than random dog girl. If your open to an alternative happenings ideas let me know and i will send them in pm.
Never hurt to have new ideas, but I don't think I would write them up anytime soon as alternative endings, I already have a bad streak for taking a long time to write stuff up.
I will more then likely put my energy into continuing my Key's chapters.
Posted by The Saint of Ravens 9 years ago Report
Lovely story, and a lovely end to three girls~
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
I think so to, I love happy endings! ^^
Posted by The Saint of Ravens 9 years ago Report
Any ending that involves hot steamy piles of former people is a happy one in my book~
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
I know right? Who could say no to being pushed through such a delightful bum. <3
Posted by rugli 9 years ago Report
In that case wouldnt make more sense, if Heathers final wordes were "I'm all yours eat me" insteed of "please, dont eat me?".
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
The universe is a very strange place. Easiest way to see it would be.
"Oh god, that person being eaten is so hot."
Where you might think you would want to be eaten, but as we all know. An acid bath is quite the way to go. >.o
Heather realized this at the end.
Posted by rugli 9 years ago Report
Maybe, but who knows maybe acid bath is worth the pain when they stop feeling and its actually quite satisfying ending as hot dog girl's poop.
But kind shame though for Jess, that she didnt end inside Sai though, I would have thought it would have been more satisfying end for her than random dog girl. If your open to an alternative happenings ideas let me know and i will send them in pm.
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
Never hurt to have new ideas, but I don't think I would write them up anytime soon as alternative endings, I already have a bad streak for taking a long time to write stuff up.
I will more then likely put my energy into continuing my Key's chapters.
Posted by rugli 9 years ago Report
So you want hear them at least?
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
Sure. ^^
Posted by Redpod 9 years ago Report
Nice digestion? eje
Posted by Mid_Night 9 years ago Report
love the story, i wish there more chapters for this amazing story.
well three girls become good healthy meals for a wild dog girl but i wonder if she is that huge could she be a breed of wolf and a dog?
Posted by SpectralStryder 9 years ago Report
Definitely worth the wait
Posted by Drakira 9 years ago Report
Aww I'm a bit sad it's over, but it was a great series. I hope you continue your writing ^.^
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
TY, and im happy people liked the short story, overall the story was roughly 15 pages long. Maybe ill do another short story in the future. <3
Posted by GilPix 9 years ago Report
Certainly one last wild and crazy ride did they all some good ;)