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This is the tale of a young cheetah facing one of those times we all know, I think, when you feel worthless, good for nothing and not knowing where you will go in life.
Luckily though his big, hunky lion step brother has a very good idea of where submissive little gay cheetah's should be going...
I got the idea for this from teasing a friend about his love for both step brothers and having his cheetah character vored, so, this story came out of it for him to get a nice hunky lion to fuck and eat him...^^
It also gained a good deal of its finer details from my fooling around with my "big brother" cvbeast and as a result of this, especially him not liking cute little slutty preyboys to end in nothing but a we belch and a trip to the bathroom, there is an optional ending of reformation in this one.
Whether it happens or not, well, you as the reader can decide...^^
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Posted by SinfullyHungry 9 years ago Report
I have to be honest I tend to prefer fatal, but this ending was just lovely.
Posted by Malus 9 years ago Report
Thank you very much and, well as stated, it works either way for them...^^
Posted by Bannor 9 years ago Report
Nice! You did a good job on making the character and his fantasy life very relatable. Jake engaging his little bro's sense of self worth worked well within the concept of someone accepting a fate of being eaten. Nicely done, and quite arousing! :3
Posted by Malus 9 years ago Report
Thank you.^^
I hope I could make a lion that would at least not dissapoint a lover of predatory lions like you.^^
I bet he would love an otter as an extra treat...
Posted by SightlessStudios 8 years ago Report
Too bad nothing ever works out like that IRL. I would elaborate, but spoilers.
Posted by Malus 8 years ago Report
Hmmmh now you have me curious.^^
You would like your real life to go along like in my story?^^
Posted by SightlessStudios 8 years ago Report
It's not that I want my life to be more like that story, but rather that I find that story to lose a little of its impact when it gets to the end. You put forth a lot of effort and time to making the narrator's feelings of inadequacy and sorrow relatable that it makes the story more driven. You lost that attachment at the end by giving it such a huge divide from reality. The lead up is well developed and the dynamics are incredible. I congratulate you, or whoever commissioned you if that is the case, for coming up with the idea. I will also send you a PM with specifics because I don't like giving spoilers in comments.
Posted by Malus 8 years ago Report
First, this is no commission, it is a story I did for friends, working in themes I had talked about with them. It is also the way I myself wanted those scenes to play out.
This includes the fact that it changes from those sorrows to learning there is actually a degree of acceptance.
I would really advise you to read the description though, the alternative reforming ending is mentioned in the tags and in the description, as is the fact that it is for the reader to decide if he wants that ending to happen or not.
Posted by SightlessStudios 8 years ago Report
Not necessarily. I just noticed that the ending of the story took a very sudden turn away from the realism that had held my interest.