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The story is based on a character of Voraciousmoga's design, Moga finds herself in trouble and hyjinks ensues.
Hope everyone likes it, this was a gift for Voraciousmoga.
Enjoy!
(Story is 15 pages, roughly 9-10k words.)
Once again everyone, if you liked it comment if you didn't explain why! any comments is good comments! I love you all. <3 ^^
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Posted by Redpod 9 years ago Report
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Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
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Posted by Redpod 9 years ago Report
Your welcome fod d.d
Posted by Voraciousmoga 9 years ago Report
First of all, Thank you soooo much!! I have never imagined a short story to be written in inspiration of my design! This truly makes me very happy! ^^ I am extremely surprised at how well you capture moga's character. Her logic and way of thinking is so clear here in your story. it is simply cute and amusing to see moga struggle with sam and her needs. I am also very satisfied with the descriptive nature pertaining to moga's digestion cycles and processes. I have yet to draw any of it or even release a descriptive note pertaining to her excretion methods and yet you capture it perfectly *claps*. You really nailed it there! XD I love how she passed sam along, really gave me the chills~ you did a great job depicting moga. I am surprised considering what little information you had to work with. Again thank you very much this has made me very very happy! ^///^
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
Ty for the kind words writing it was a lot of fun I'm happy that got mobs down really well i mostly tried to remember your old work and the info you gave me so I'm super happy you like it ^^
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
Moga* stupid spell correct on phone ><
Posted by DoubleOSnake 9 years ago Report
Amazing story Winny! I loved how you detailed Moga's digestive tract and what happens to her meals. Absolutely brilliant! Also, Moga's personality was so innocent and adorable. :3
If I had to nitpick, there were a few spelling errors and places in a need of a comma. However! It was a great story none the less and I hope someday that I too, can write 9-10 k words with ease. :D
Posted by Winny 9 years ago Report
Nothing easy about writing 15 pages of story. >.> well not for me, the way I see Moga herself as an innocent person to a fault, not understanding fully that food has feelings unless ofcourse they are friends then suddenly Moga believes they arent food. (sometimes, as I recall Luna can fall into group A or Group B) :d