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Tags: Adele Angel prey Big Breasts curvy predator demi-human prey Digestion Disposal F/F f/multiple Female Pred Female Prey gorging Horizon in the middle of nowhere Human Pred Human Prey Kimi Aoi Malga Margot Mitotsudaira Multiple Preys Naomasa Oral Vore Scat Soft Vore stretchy belly suzu Trickery Unwilling Prey
Horizon in the middle of nowhere vore fanfic.
Kimi/AdeleNaomasaMalgaMargotSuzuMitotsudaira
Kimi Aoi is an outrageous woman who oft make outrageous decisions. And because her brother cannot make breakfast this day... she decides to gun for a breakfast with a whole lot more meat to it.
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http://genesis-horizon.wikia.com/wiki/Kyoukai_Senjou_no_Horizon_Wiki
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Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
Every single one of your characters are awful, awful, ugly, hateful, sickening people. There is not one, not ONE likable or relatable person in the bunch. Don't get me wrong, your level of DETAIL is...like, fucking AMAZING. I mean, incredibly so. But the characters that are doing this stuff are just so...nasty.
It really takes away from the work when the people doing this stuff are consistently, again and again, the same type of monstrous person. I mean, for God's sake, one of your stories has a mother eating her children and she doesn't even CARE. That's kind of a buzzkill!
Posted by Vir 9 years ago Report
To be honest, a fair amount of people happen to have a preference for "cruel/indifferent" predators (though labeling them all like that is misssing some context) Sometimes I include some sense of right and wrong, but I save it mostly for non-vore stories that I post somewhere entirely else.
As for the mother thing, it was a "what if" scenario, non-canon to the character. Occasionally when I rp with her having children, she is very protective of them.
Otherwise, thanks for the review.
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
I suppose I can understand it to a degree. It would just be nice if maybe you wrote a story that had a more moral predator, or maybe one revolving around karmic comeuppance for, say, one of types of people you so often write for. Like having an amoral predator finding himself suddenly at the mercy of an even bigger predator who isn't amoral, but IS eager and willing to eat him alive. Because if you did a story like that, I'd probably fave it instantly, with your level of detail and effort you put into writing, it would be freaking awesome!
Posted by Vir 9 years ago Report
I suppose, but for the sake of elaboration; Morality is largely a mental construction that applies to nowhere outside the human mind. The setting in which my OCs exist in for example takes the lack of morality connected to animals hunting and eating on one another and applies it to society. A crapsack world in the context of the real world, but it is what it is and its denizens accepts the way it works. I like to view it not as a black and white world, but one of several shades of gray.
A brutal world, but one I quite like. Similar to how I like Warhammer 40,000 which is famous/infamous for being extremely grim and dark, with a notable preference for the Imperial Guard that behind the veil of ordinary soldiers' heroism annually may only exterminate some dozen minor alien races for simply being there - not that the other factions are much better.
In the end, I guess it comes down to preference.
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
Warhammer-wait. Is that one in which every single world is like this floating cube and there's battles taking place on every single side that last for years?
Posted by Vir 9 years ago Report
Tabletop game with many video games and novels to its name. Let's just say the background is extremely brutal.
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
I DO remember the same company that did that piece of shit Ride to Hell made a video game for Warhammer 40K recently. Was NOT my best introduction to the franchise.
Posted by Vir 9 years ago Report
Well, suffice it to say some things are more entertaining if you're willing to shut off your brain, or turn off your morality filter while you delve into it.
And in matters of vore, which is largely fap-material, indifferent predators is simply more my kind of thing.
Posted by saintheartwing 9 years ago Report
Fair enough. Though if you ever do change your mind and write something different than usual, I'll definitely want to read it.
Posted by Lialketta 9 years ago Report
Love your work as always, cruel characters or not. :P it's always a pleasure to read your work, just wish I could write at the same level of detail.
Posted by Vir 9 years ago Report
Thank you very much. :)
Posted by Flame14 9 years ago Report
Love the massive meal of six girls. Wish we saw these large binges in some of your other stories. Would personally love to read about Hinata or such after a big meal like that. Have to admit that all the names do get a little confusing but that's what Wiki is for.
Hope to see more of Horizen-verse and more Naruto-verse vore from you.
Posted by Vir 9 years ago Report
Thank you. There's even more action in the extended version.
Posted by algog8 9 years ago Report
I would love to see Kimi eat the whole ship, and then some more.