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After Merlin save's King Liones from his sickness she takes something of his own as payment.

Nanatsu no Taizai story

Requested by TechniMIND

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Grimmahr: I'm fine with really any type of comments, I'd proffer no flames but to each there own and I'd hate to try to muzzle what anyone thinks of my work.

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TechniMIND

Posted by TechniMIND 4 years ago Report

I really like how you write! It's my type :P

️I must say, I enjoyed the story a lot! I'm a big fan of merlin! She's my type of giantess!

Amazing as always! An alternative ending of the anime that I'll really like XD

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Grimmahr

Posted by Grimmahr 4 years ago Report

I'm glad its to your liking TechniMIND, would have felt bad if it wasn't xD

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eleventh

Posted by eleventh 4 years ago Report

Woven into the storyline events, impressive.
Overall I enjoyed it, noticed a few typos such as you're instead of your and they're instead of their.

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Grimmahr

Posted by Grimmahr 4 years ago Report

Darn i thought i rooted all of those out :( Thanks for telling me I'll take a look at my saved copy and see if i can spot them.

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Grimmahr

Posted by Grimmahr 4 years ago Report

Hey man, everyone's allowed to there opinion and i take no offense to yours ^.^

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Grimmahr

Posted by Grimmahr 4 years ago Report

Like i said everyone has a right to there opinions ^.^

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Evilpancake

Posted by Evilpancake 4 years ago Report

I must agree with this individual, maybe take a good look at some novels or good writings here, but i couldn't make it past the 8th sentence, i wouldn't even know where to begin corrections or ways to improve...

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Grimmahr

Posted by Grimmahr 4 years ago Report

Glad to hear your Opinion.

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nysmnyd

Posted by nysmnyd 4 years ago Report

To me it sounds like you're not even going to take our advice into consideration, if that's the matter then please just come out and say it rather than acting nice.

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Grimmahr

Posted by Grimmahr 4 years ago Report

I take all opinions into consideration, i just don't agree with yours ^.^ I am thankful for your input though.

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nysmnyd

Posted by nysmnyd 4 years ago Report

I asked you to stop acting nice, it makes you come across as cantankerously condescending.

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Grimmahr

Posted by Grimmahr 4 years ago Report

I'm not trying to, I'm just generally a nice person and try not to insult others for there views. I understand your opinions but i find them invalid to my writing.

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nysmnyd

Posted by nysmnyd 4 years ago Report

well if you're trying to be terrible then good job, otherwise stop thinking you're such hot shit and actually acknowledge when you need to improve instead of being arrogant and dismissive.

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DRayElliott

Posted by DRayElliott 4 years ago Report

Good story potential, awful sentence and paragraph structure.

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