Posted by Houyo 9 years ago Report

I like the scenario, but the predator's mentality kind of creeped me out. Something about the deluded nice guy sensibilities he has rubs me the wrong way. Then again predators don't really need to be justified in their ways of thinking, so I'm probably looking too deep into this. Nice story. Could use more details in the vore, but I always love M/F.

Posted by 20002000 9 years ago Report

The angst of a thousand autistic neckbeards are in this story.

Posted by Frednurk 9 years ago Report

This creeps me the fuck out. And I'm on a site where people get off on the idea of being swallowed. How does that make sense?

Posted by Asntan 9 years ago Report

b/c it hits close to home

Posted by Frednurk 9 years ago Report

Yeah, I guess you're right. It feels way too... possible.

Posted by Choco0 8 years ago Report

That what I love in this.

Posted by rugli 9 years ago Report

Thought this was awsome idea, :) but it did not creep me out would be the exact thing I did do if I was Freind zoned.

Posted by predator_or_prey 8 years ago Report

The protagonist is my hero now. She had it coming, anyway, I think. :/

Posted by Assimilation 8 years ago Report

oh my god this feels so painful to read because it's so goddamn real

Fantastic work, buddy.

Posted by Ruler101 8 years ago Report

I think I know the protagonists name.

Elliot Rodger

Posted by timdavis 8 years ago Report

some grammar tips--

You say "less she reject me" in the first paragraph. You mean "lest".

And twice you say "conferrable"--you mean "comfortable".

Posted by PhantomWolf 4 years ago Report

Was going through my favorites and came across this, definitely hits close to home, nice job