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Miles takes a seat on a crowded subway beside very large and quite pudgy mouse girl. He lets his fascination in her tummy get the better of him, and when a fellow passenger doesn't watch where she's going, he ends up getting closer than he'd intended.
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A trade with 9kirby99 after my previous navel vore story struck a chord.
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Posted by Thousandpath 9 years ago Report
That was very cozy. I really liked the happy ending.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Glad you liked it! The story was all 9kirby99. I just supplied the words.
Posted by Thousandpath 9 years ago Report
As a writer, I know that supplying the words can be quite the ordeal sometimes.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
True enough.
Posted by 9kirby99 9 years ago Report
I love this story. I hope to do another trade soon~! (I have a lot of space open for trades if you're interested.)
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I'm glad you're happy with it! Your stories tend to be short and sweet, and fun to write, but I'm going to be short of writing time for the foreseeable future. Considering it's been ages since I continued my HDTF story, I think I should hold off on trades and stuff for a bit. Maybe later, though!
Posted by 9kirby99 9 years ago Report
Alright. I need things to draw this week, so if you don't mind having me draw you a pic before you can work on a story, PM me. :3
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Will do.
Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 9 years ago Report
A very cute story. Accidental vore can be a rather fun concept.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
I agree. Accidental or unaware vore is great fun.
Posted by Groblek 9 years ago Report
Fun and cute, nicely done!
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Bright 9 years ago Report
Nice story. I like how it ended safely.
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
Glad you liked it. I prefer things that are explicitly safe, or at least open ended with no definite sign of danger.
Posted by animedog 9 years ago Report
I immediately thought of Donkey from Shreck when she said "I'm making waffles" XD
Posted by marloweny 9 years ago Report
A happy coincidence!
Posted by 48th agent 8 years ago Report
Aww, so cute! It sounds nice, disappearing into a nice, soft belly for an afternoon, and feeling the comforting cradling. Sounds wonderful~
Posted by marloweny 8 years ago Report
It could be a nice way to while away the hours.