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Miles takes a seat on a crowded subway beside very large and quite pudgy mouse girl. He lets his fascination in her tummy get the better of him, and when a fellow passenger doesn't watch where she's going, he ends up getting closer than he'd intended.

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A trade with  9kirby99 after my previous navel vore story struck a chord.

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Thousandpath

Posted by Thousandpath 4 years ago Report

That was very cozy. I really liked the happy ending.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

Glad you liked it! The story was all 9kirby99. I just supplied the words.

Thousandpath

Posted by Thousandpath 4 years ago Report

As a writer, I know that supplying the words can be quite the ordeal sometimes.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

True enough.

9kirby99

Posted by 9kirby99 4 years ago Report

I love this story. I hope to do another trade soon~! (I have a lot of space open for trades if you're interested.)

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

I'm glad you're happy with it! Your stories tend to be short and sweet, and fun to write, but I'm going to be short of writing time for the foreseeable future. Considering it's been ages since I continued my HDTF story, I think I should hold off on trades and stuff for a bit. Maybe later, though!

9kirby99

Posted by 9kirby99 4 years ago Report

Alright. I need things to draw this week, so if you don't mind having me draw you a pic before you can work on a story, PM me. :3

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

Will do.

TheTastefulGentlman

Posted by TheTastefulGentlman 4 years ago Report

A very cute story. Accidental vore can be a rather fun concept.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

I agree. Accidental or unaware vore is great fun.

Groblek

Posted by Groblek 4 years ago Report

Fun and cute, nicely done!

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

Thanks!

Bright

Posted by Bright 4 years ago Report

Nice story. I like how it ended safely.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

Glad you liked it. I prefer things that are explicitly safe, or at least open ended with no definite sign of danger.

animedog

Posted by animedog 4 years ago Report

I immediately thought of Donkey from Shreck when she said "I'm making waffles" XD

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

A happy coincidence!

48th agent

Posted by 48th agent 4 years ago Report

Aww, so cute! It sounds nice, disappearing into a nice, soft belly for an afternoon, and feeling the comforting cradling. Sounds wonderful~

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 4 years ago Report

It could be a nice way to while away the hours.