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This is an old version of this chapter! If you liked this, please read the current version as well! https://aryion.com/g4/view/747986
Reina makes a curious discovery one day while making love to Yusuke which results in her somehow entering his cock. Things get complicated when Mitsuki returns and he decides to have with her while Reina is still inside him, sending Reina from one of her lovers to the other.
(As of December 2021, this is no longer considered a "current" chapter and won't be updated with any corrections or additions. While this is a .doc file and not a .txt file, it will be saved in the Old Chapters folder for posterity.)
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Posted by CoralKate 8 years ago Report
Really good, though I'm not as into Unbirthing and Cockvore.
Posted by Elpie 8 years ago Report
then it's a good thing this is mostly soft vore, then ;) the CV is just a means to an end, really--i don't like it all that much, either
Posted by CoralKate 8 years ago Report
Yay, kindred spirit! I'm more into soft vore stuff than weird sex stuff. XD
Posted by Elpie 8 years ago Report
i'd meant more about CV particularly--i like UB as much as soft vore
Posted by CoralKate 8 years ago Report
Yeah, UB is definitely better than CV, but how much I like it depends on how it is done.
Posted by Elpie 8 years ago Report
if you haven't yet, you may want to take a look at some of my other submissions in the same folder as this one, three of which focus on unbirth
Posted by CoralKate 8 years ago Report
Thank you for the suggestion! :)
Posted by Marq 8 years ago Report
What's the difference between these reposts and the older versions that were posted a few years ago?
Posted by Elpie 8 years ago Report
there's some expansion of detail, but the main difference is the reformat. before, they used .txt files from Notepad (though i wrote it in Microsoft Word) while these new ones are .doc files (Microsoft Word documents) which keep the original formatting, such as actual italicization instead of signifying that with asterisks *like this*. it also lets "special characters" stay in the writing, for example "naïve", "fiancée", "Tōkyō" instead if "naive", "fiancee", "Tokyo".
it's also just an opportunity for me to reassess what i'd written before and correct some errors. in this one, for instance, Yusuke directly observes that Mitsuki wouldn't realistically be able to communicate with them from inside Reina at that small size, where in the old one she communicates with them via Morse code, which in retrospect is just silly :P
Posted by thelandcruzer 8 years ago Report
great story!!! very well thought out.
do the girls need another guy to even things out I would surly help???? :O
Posted by Elpie 8 years ago Report
they're good for now ;) though i DO have a couple of ideas for later entries. those are a good way off, though
Posted by thelandcruzer 8 years ago Report
DAM IT!!! I always have to just shoot my mouth off. oh well I just have to wait.
Posted by Bradyradtke 2 years ago Report
Hey. What’s the orde of comics
Posted by Elpie 2 years ago Report
if you mean "what order do the chapters go in", they kinda don't HAVE an order--after 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, and Epilogue, they're basically supposed to be self-contained and go from there. think of them as alternate continuities that you can read in any order you want. ;)