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Dog Gone It - a story By Dark_phoenix -- Report

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Inspired by the series by  variant
Sunset apologized for eating Spike, who didn't really mind the whole experience. Spike is willing to try again but Sunset has a lot of issues to overcome.

My very first vore story. I hope you enjoy.
I found I searched for more character development. It makes more sense for worldbuilding but perhaps not the most obvious for a vore fic.

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Putinforgod

Posted by Putinforgod 6 years ago Report

That... Was amazing.

You actually know how to write, the story was well paced and you managed to add some emotion without making it sappy.

Also the sex and swallowing scenes were pretty enjoyable, I really liked how you described how her throat and belly bulged as Spike went in.

I can't wait to see more of this, it got a lot of potential.

Variant

Posted by Variant 6 years ago Report

Nice. I'm not much for dog-on-human, but the vore was really well done and a fun read!

Dark_phoenix

Posted by Dark_phoenix 6 years ago Report

If you want I can post a second version with those cut out

Variant

Posted by Variant 6 years ago Report

Don't worry about it.

KennAllyGatorGuin

Posted by KennAllyGatorGuin 6 years ago Report

I like this, it's actually really good!

Dark_phoenix

Posted by Dark_phoenix 6 years ago Report

thanks