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four girls go on a road trip already knowing only one is coming back.
This was a commission from puck5 that went way longer than I intended because the prompt was VERY good
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Posted by ironman362 8 years ago Report
Love it!
Posted by Squall 8 years ago Report
That ending... Good writing.
Posted by supersaiyango 8 years ago Report
Interesting ending
Posted by puck5 8 years ago Report
Awesome. Thank you again for writing it.
Posted by Ridwanwolf 8 years ago Report
That plot twist at the end.
How does that work?
Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report
SPOILERS
Lily actually *sees* Sarah reform in the bathroom at the motel. She has sort of implant that reforms her. That's what all that Flash and Jaw Dropping was at that part.
I didn't want to give away that she was still alive til the end though.
Posted by iviruniverse 8 years ago Report
ohhh fantastic work! I usually don't have time to read the longer written commissions but i'm glad I made time to read this one
Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report
Thanks for taking the time! It was a joy to write it!
Posted by madcells 8 years ago Report
WAIT SARAH!!!!!
Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report
Wait for what?
Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 8 years ago Report
Aaah, definitely not enough of this sort've absorption around - and otherwise, well, sooo many things. Loved this story, cheers for sharing it!
Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report
You really have to thank puck5 for commissioning it and providing the great setup. I just ran with it!