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Posted by Diamonte 8 years ago Report
Lots of typos and grammar problems, but I like the idea, the tone, and the general content.
Posted by Deleteduser532 8 years ago Report
I am glad that you liked it. In truth, I fully agree with you that there are LOTS of typos and grammar mistakes. I realized that as soon as I was done submitting it to this site as well as two other sites. It is embarrassing that I forgot to check for mistakes and edit it to suit each site that I submitted it. Unfortunately, I was in a rush today to get it on this site and the other sites before I had to leave for the day. I am going to make a finalized (i.e. updated and edited) version of this story. However, I am glad that the tone, content, and aspect of the idea were not lost due to my rash desire to get this on the net as soon as possible without properly checking and editing it.
Posted by Deleteduser532 8 years ago Report
It has been rectified.
Posted by Diamonte 8 years ago Report
Great! Thanks for posting these stories.
Posted by PhantomWolf 8 years ago Report
Interesting never have I seen someone make Red the predator, plot twist lbs, but seriously not bad I like how you make them lover's rather than enemies like in most stories (including the all famous traditional story), good job!
Posted by Deleteduser532 8 years ago Report
Thanks! :)
Posted by Malezor 8 years ago Report
Was a very good story! :D
Posted by Deleteduser532 8 years ago Report
Thanks! :)