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Here it is! The penultimate chapter in Jasmine's adventures at Sunny Valley high school. Once I'm done with this I'll be working on getting through some backed-up requests, then continue with the original Care and Feeding of Freaky Plants. I have a general outline for the rest of that story, and I think you'll like it!
Yet another late posting, although I''m sure you're used to it by now. Fortunately, this is because this past chapter had overrun its length, so I had to cut it in two. Net result: this chapter was late but the next chapter is already partially written. Hopefully get that one up within the next week.
As ever, please let me know what you think, any requests or suggestions, and also
Please, enjoy!
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Posted by crufl 8 years ago Report
Interesting pred choice. I enjoy the character development, too.
Posted by MrNobody 8 years ago Report
As hot as the content is, just something about the whole premise... IDK, it rubs me the wrong way.
Posted by Eater99 8 years ago Report
Sorry to hear that it bothers you. If you ever figure out what it is that rubs you the wrong way with this storyline, please let me know.
I hate upset to people, and I'd like to try to avoid doing so
Posted by MrNobody 8 years ago Report
It probably is tied into my political beliefs. I just stopped and realized that the US Government in this story is basically allowing people to pronounce death sentences on a bunch of minors without due process because of "overpopulation". The idea of the government taking away your right to live because of some agenda when you've done nothing wrong... it reminds me of the George Orwell novels that scared the shit out of me in middle school. Or stories of dictatorships like the Khmer Rouge in Cambodia and the Duvalier regime in Hati. Just the thought that a leader has the power to do that to the people they govern...
And given the current President's record with drone strikes and his ability to kill any citizen without due process by declaring them a terrorist, that fear is very real.
Kind of like how the "radioactive monster" movies of the 50's and 60's were scary back then because nuclear war was a very real possibility.
That said, I like the vore and sexual tension in your stories, and would love to see more of the digestive process. Sorry for the political rambling!
Posted by Eater99 8 years ago Report
Nah, it's ok. I never even thought about it like that. I just find something appealing in the ultra-casual attitude toward vore, like, refusing to be eaten is considered selfish or prudish. The government only is allowing vore to be practiced like it is because that's the way (nearly) everyone wants it to be
That said, I do kinda go all over the place with how people in my stories feel about vore, so I can see how that wouldn't necessarily be the first thought that occurs to people