I actually agree with some of the characters in this part. I wouldn't want to wait an extra fortnight for my turn to be eaten. The anticipation would be unbearable. I would volunteer to go for it right then and there.
It'll wrap in the next part. My first crack at it came out too dry - descriptive, expository and boring. But after umpteen rereads I know what was wrong with it. The solution is to let the characters do the talking and make it fun.
Posted by Jamie263 8 years ago Report
Keep up the good work, I'm loving this. Can't wait for the next part.
Posted by innertrack 8 years ago Report
Thanks for staying with the story through the buildup. Next comes the actual vore!
Posted by Jamie263 8 years ago Report
I actually agree with some of the characters in this part. I wouldn't want to wait an extra fortnight for my turn to be eaten. The anticipation would be unbearable. I would volunteer to go for it right then and there.
Posted by spider2828 8 years ago Report
It is going to continue?? it looks amazing ~<3
Posted by innertrack 8 years ago Report
It'll wrap in the next part. My first crack at it came out too dry - descriptive, expository and boring. But after umpteen rereads I know what was wrong with it. The solution is to let the characters do the talking and make it fun.