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Sometimes the prey is actually just another predator. Make sure to secure your prey before relaxing!

Alternate ending to: http://aryion.com/g4/view/321775

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Bright

Posted by Bright 8 years ago Report

Turnaround is fair play in my book.

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report

I feel like this was the superior version. We got to see what was going on in everyone's head and how they reacted. In the other Kara goes in and it's hard to tell if she is unwilling or not.

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 8 years ago Report

Yeah I tried to make it show the perspective changing from her to Nerin as Kara became just food in the other story. This one ends up more balanced.