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Grab and Go Breakfast By TwrchTwryth -- Report

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Hadassah is going to be late for work, so she doesn't have time to make or buy breakfast. Fortunately, she has these tasty teenage daughters just lying around...

This is my shortest story in a long time, just a bit over 700 words. I wrote this in one sitting on Friday with minimal editing since. I very well may come back and do more with this family...or this may be it.

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TheRenic

Posted by TheRenic 5 years ago Report

SO it looks like form context that daughters getting ate was a normal occurrence, is there any sort of reforming going on to refresh the flood supply, or are the few daughters mentioned all thats left of a very large batch of offspring?

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

Both -- reformation, plus fewer daughters now than they started out with.

DRayElliott

Posted by DRayElliott 5 years ago Report

I think Hadassah has a reformation chamber in her house.

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

I think you're on to something.

Adseria

Posted by Adseria 5 years ago Report

I think. At least, I think I do.

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

I think the ending of "Book Club" is Germane, even if not explicit about the Horvitz household.

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

Thanks!

BardicLasher

Posted by BardicLasher 5 years ago Report

I like this story, though I'd definitely like to see /more/ of it. 700 words was just... not enough.

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

Shorter seems to be sweeter, though. I posted three stories in four days, at 7, 10, and 2 pages long. This 2 pager got the most likes, despite being posted last. Maybe it's the content, maybe it's the length.

BardicLasher

Posted by BardicLasher 5 years ago Report

... There's a likes option?

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

Eh, likes, favorites, same thing. Whoops.

atreides213

Posted by atreides213 5 years ago Report

Lovely. I'd love to see some more of this little family's misadventures. Hopefully the mother has a habit of forgetting to eat breakfast :)

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

Who says she's the only predator?

ryanshowseason3

Posted by ryanshowseason3 5 years ago Report

Nice little snippet. Ambiguous on the fatality as well, but it may be intended.

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

Intentional, but partly because I didn't want to do too much world building in a snippet.

Tafillia

Posted by Tafillia 5 years ago Report

Love it, wanna see more of them <3

TwrchTwryth

Posted by TwrchTwryth 5 years ago Report

Me too.