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Leshana is a merchant travelling to Alphasiron, the capital city of the strange Seraphian empire, famed for its mysterious, incredibly powerful ruler, the monstrous Emperor Goldeneye the First and Eternal. But she’s just here to trade. The world is safe for people who aren’t actually doing anything bad, because it is ultimately a fair and just universe. Right?

Wrong. Accused of a crime she did not commit by a financial rival, Leshana is taken to the inescapable Alsar Prison to serve her time. And really, her bad luck has barely started.

Goldeneye’s empire, this time to be a terrible tourist attraction for  Leshana who is the delectable fox. Hope she likes!

Contains: goldie goldeneye gryphon griffon griffin kitsune fox m/f soft vore swallowing graphic digestion cruelty sadism psychological torture pain despair male predator female prey

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sd43

Posted by sd43 3 years ago Report

You know, your writing just keeps getting better and better. I also like these stories that add a little information about the world!

TheGuyWhoKnows

Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 3 years ago Report

This is one of my favourite comments I've ever gotten. Thank you very very much. ULtimately that is all I can hope for.

sd43

Posted by sd43 3 years ago Report

It was one of my favorites to make as well, and it was well deserved. I always love to see people making great progress in pretty much anything.

Zontan

Posted by Zontan 3 years ago Report

Your writing is as always excellent. Goldeneye stories always conflict me so interestingly, which is perhaps why I like them.

Typos I noticed: missing word after "only when the spasm" and in "Goldeneye raised his to the skies."

TheGuyWhoKnows

Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 3 years ago Report

Urgh, thanks. I'll look into changing them.

My pleasure to conflict you, though. I try to make sure people feel the horror in my stories.

Leshana

Posted by Leshana 3 years ago Report

Where do I even start with this one?

Leshana

Posted by Leshana 3 years ago Report

This manages to capture the lovely theme of "punished for a crime she did not commit" but manages to avoid the sometimes unpleasant thought of being thought of having actually been guilty. That's right, he KNOWS she didn't deserve to be there... but she gets the gurgles anyway. I actually had to read this in multiple sittings!

TheGuyWhoKnows

Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 3 years ago Report

Hee hee. Yep, Goldeneye finds morality to be an amusing mortal construct to be used, like everything else, for his own ends. In this case it's to cause the maximum amount of emotional suffering in his prey. Leshana's problem wasn't with figuring out what his principles were, it's that she didn't realise he had no principles at all. Poor poor delicious foxy.

Leshana

Posted by Leshana 3 years ago Report

I didn't even fully understand why I liked that aspect so much until I thought about it after. So not only is it a great story, but I walk away with literally expanded understanding.

TheGuyWhoKnows

Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 3 years ago Report

Heee. Delighted that you enjoyed it so and even got something out of it. My pleasure to serve. : 3

Leshana

Posted by Leshana 3 years ago Report

Oooh you upgraded the icon! Awesome, I like it.

TheGuyWhoKnows

Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 3 years ago Report

Heh, yes. I needed to spruce it up a bit. And Leshana should be in there as well. She is the main course of the story, after all. ; 3