That's excellent to hear, thanks a lot. I was a little worried that I'd done too much build-up and not enough pay-off, so it's good to know people liked the backstory.
Also, in regards to the length, my next story is going to be a fair bit longer than this one, so I'm hoping I handle it without it becoming rambling and needlessly stretched :)
Thanks! Sadly digestion isn't something I'm experienced with either reading or writing about, because it's only very recently that I've started to be more interested in it. But maybe in a future story :)
It adds bit realism to the story, however I do fully understand it’s not everyone’s thing. I, myself love a good digestion scene with the prey melting down into a nice puddle of mush inside the pred. But hey, what do you expect from a shark
Haha, thank you! I've been around the vore community for years, but only as a lurker. I was reading through the forums here and came across the concept of pred telling prey they will eat them years in advance. It stuck with me, and I eventually decided to write up my own version of that idea ^^
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 8 years ago Report
Always nice to see a mouse put where they deserve to be
Posted by Trebortron3 8 years ago Report
It's so cute when they complain, like it'll make a difference :)
Posted by Rhysion 8 years ago Report
Relatively short, but an all around all right story I thought. There was building backstory which added more to these characters and I liked.
Posted by Trebortron3 8 years ago Report
That's excellent to hear, thanks a lot. I was a little worried that I'd done too much build-up and not enough pay-off, so it's good to know people liked the backstory.
Also, in regards to the length, my next story is going to be a fair bit longer than this one, so I'm hoping I handle it without it becoming rambling and needlessly stretched :)
Posted by Smitty 8 years ago Report
Awesome story. Love this concept.
Posted by Trebortron3 8 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you liked it! (And thanks for the faves)
Posted by sharky 8 years ago Report
very good love bird vore, would love to see some digestion in this story also !
Posted by Trebortron3 8 years ago Report
Thanks! Sadly digestion isn't something I'm experienced with either reading or writing about, because it's only very recently that I've started to be more interested in it. But maybe in a future story :)
Posted by sharky 8 years ago Report
It adds bit realism to the story, however I do fully understand it’s not everyone’s thing. I, myself love a good digestion scene with the prey melting down into a nice puddle of mush inside the pred. But hey, what do you expect from a shark
Posted by lalalalas 7 years ago Report
Woah! Great story! Where did you come from?!
Posted by Trebortron3 7 years ago Report
Haha, thank you! I've been around the vore community for years, but only as a lurker. I was reading through the forums here and came across the concept of pred telling prey they will eat them years in advance. It stuck with me, and I eventually decided to write up my own version of that idea ^^