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A commission written for puck5, complete at 5001 words!
When Naruto receives several marriage requests as a single man, he has little choice in the matter. Though to keep the peace, he has to do something, right?
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Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
Interesting I thought that Naruto would Marry them all
Posted by Flame14 4 years ago Report
Shame about Hinata. Would love to read an alternate story with Hinata removing the elders after they tried something like this. Still, it's nice to see more of Ayame.
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
I know but she has known Naruto longer than hinata
Posted by Flame14 4 years ago Report
How can you be so sure? As far as I know we have no idea when Naruto found the Ichiraku ramen stand and if the Naruto movie The Last is to be believed, Naruto and Hinata first met when they were like 6.
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
Remember when naruto was thrown out of the orpangh and hinata was always shy
Posted by Enteresting 4 years ago Report
The story of Naruto: The Last mixes a few things up. But Naruto knew Ayame and Teuchi when he was quite young. He first ran away from them because he thought they hated him like all the others, but he quickly warmed up to them when he realized they didn't care about his burden/tenant. Give or take, Naruto probably met Ayame and Teuchi first, learned friendship from them and then met Hinata.
Posted by Flame14 4 years ago Report
Makes sense. I'd like to say that this story seems to flow together quite well. It's much better then when you first started.
So any idea what sort of story is up next for you?
Posted by Enteresting 4 years ago Report
None yet, though someone requested another story which is in the Pokemon universe. Two other people have asked for commissions, and there's one that's been nagging me to get wrote.
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
Well You do have some interesting stories and will you do non fatal
Posted by Enteresting 4 years ago Report
The nagging one features a lot of non-fatal, plus copious amounts of sex and Yuri. It's set in the Narutoverse as well.
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
With who
Posted by Enteresting 4 years ago Report
You'll find out.
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
Well you know what would be interesting
Posted by Enteresting 4 years ago Report
What would be interesting?
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
In the show instead of Marrying Hinata Naruto married someone else
Posted by Enteresting 4 years ago Report
True, but then it'd break the story.
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
So Hinata has never talked to Naruto much as kids as I recall
Posted by Flame14 4 years ago Report
Nor did most of the others.
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
True but really I never really did see Naruto and hinata as a couple really
Posted by Flame14 4 years ago Report
A personal preference. Hinata's initial concept design had a few subtle clues that she had been created with the idea of being with Naruto, or that there would at least be some romantic related trait to their relationship.
Please don't go thinking I'm trying to start some sort of pairing war as that's not the case. I'm simply referencing an old picture of the creators design and making a conclusion based off of what I saw in it.
Posted by darklord42 4 years ago Report
Ok