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Glorrrrrrrp... Oh come on Zuzen, you're not really going to be a jerk, are you? C:
Posted by Demicus 7 years ago Report
Heee, game mechanics as described by the characters! I like it!
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Posted by deletn92b69g26 7 years ago Report
I will admit, this stories aren't usually my type of bag, but I will admit, this is something about it that keeps me coming back for me. Though, if I want to be honest, the whole "fake out" thing is getting old. It kinda removes all tension at this point. Why even end on a cliff hanger? We all know the main character is going to get out come next chapter. So leaving ominous words that tease a death is entirely pointless.
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Posted by deletn92b69g26 7 years ago Report
Shit, I meant but I will confess, not that I will admit for the second time. Christ, I suck at typing sometimes. X_X
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Posted by Aces 7 years ago Report
It could be that I am trying to get the opposite effect. C: Boy Who Cried Wolf and all.
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Posted by deletn92b69g26 7 years ago Report
Gotcha.
That makes sense. Though that means that sooner or later it won't be a fake out. Which could leave for some rather intriguing scenarios. Either way, rest assured I will be still be reading.
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