Listen on FA (lower quality to fit on the site): http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17732015/
Or download: http://www.mediafire.com/download/bwb9r2p8983hg03/jeschke-feline-affections-commission-for-s3eker.mp3

Commission for s3eker on FA from September of last year. First time doing full-tour too, so, that's something fun. It's pretty simple, the viewer (that's you) is going on a journey through a Luxray's body in order to calm her hungry stomach down. Sort of like drinking a bunch of water when you start feeling hungry, so that you stave off the hunger a little longer. In this case, though, she might just like the feeling of you sliding around in there, y'never know.

If you want, you can imagine this as any other big feline, the commissioner requested it to be a Luxray but it's still general enough that any feline works. Plus Luxray sounds are kind of hard to find cause....they don't -entirely- exist?

One last note, too, it doesn't explicitly say it in the icon or in text, but this is clean full tour. Nothing icky in there. :B

Anyway, as always, headphones are recommended. Synopsis below.

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0:00 - It's been a lazy evening indoors for you so far, but it looks like that's about to change as you hear your abnormally-large Luxray (7 feet from foot to shoulder, even!) walking in your direction. Her purring, the soft growling of her stomach, and how she starts smacking her lips from a few feet away.. You know well enough why she's sought you out, and it isn't for getting her fur brushed.
0:20 - She starts forward again, but instead of walking straight up to you, she comes up against your side and presses her paunchy gut up against the side of your head. You'd think about how you're feeding her too much, but the growls of a hungry stomach are a bit distracting. Right on the other side of her skin and muscle, there was her stomach, complaining and caterwauling about not having food inside it.
0:39 - She smacks her lips, leans in, and a long sniff over your head pulls at your hair. A low rumble tells you what she thinks of your scent.
0:46 - She steps away and back -- letting you go another day without her growling stomach making you deaf in one ear -- and waits patiently while you dutifully remove your pants, pull your shirt over your head, and toss all your clothing into a pile. Now more appetizing-looking as a meal, she steps closer in, making you feel rather small as well as bare. At least you aren't a mouse? She takes several moments just inhaling your scent, though, so it isn't much better.
1:16 - She yawns right in front of you, her jaws spreading open and only slightly surrounding your head in a lazy, overindulgent display of her mouth. You take in the view, watching the little movements of her tongue and her jaws, hearing her stomach calling you, grumbles echoing up her waiting throat..
1:25 - Deciding to tease instead of immediately eating, she pulls her jaws away and finishes her yawn. But even if she's toying with you, she's still hungry and wanting to eat you eventually, so she can't resist sticking her tongue out a bit and slurrrrRRRRRRping at you. Her tongue digs into your skin, and not just because of its natural roughness, she's really wanting a snack.
1:40 - One more lick, her jaws open up, and down they come around you, your only light now coming from around your waist, where her lips were. Her suckling and slurping (and swallowing) is right in your ears while she takes a long taste of your bare body, her jaws firmly holding you in place despite how little you were planning on trying to squirm away.
1:53 - She swallows, drawing you deep into her throat with a quick undulation of muscle, the coolness of the outside air replaced with the heat and deep purring in your ears. Each little gulp pulls you along, sliding you down through semi-loose throat walls and down into..
2:02 - You hit her stomach like you're coming off of the end of a water slide, a little splashdown in the weak stomach acids that've been accumulating there ever since she got hungry in the first place. The jostling of air and the food that's arrived makes the stomach rumble and growl in growing volume around you, until it fades with the near-inaudible release of air from the stomach. A second later, she lets out a powerful belch, the sound resonating and coming straight down the throat to where you are. It's good to know that your Pokemon finds you that good of a meal? At any rate, the bottom of her stomach is wrapped up underneath you like you're in a hammock, so you have to imagine you make a nice visible swell on her gut, filling her frame out nicely, but not to the point where her legs are bumping against you as she starts to walk. You don't have much choice in the matter, so you can only sit and listen to the bubbling and frothing of the stomach juices, and the groans of her stomach. And the TV someone left on. Maybe it was you? Bit too late to change that now.
3:05 - Heading outdoors, she takes in a long breath of the fresh air and sighs, while you're still breathing in the pleasant aroma of what she had for supper a while ago. At least you're doing your job in addressing her hunger, though, you're hearing less overt grumbles and groans from her stomach and more general satisfaction. So you've calmed things down a bit in there. And given her stomach a bit of sway while she walks around. There's probably not anyone nearby watching her stroll around (and seeing little bulges on her stomach whenever you move), but still. Glorps, gurgles, glrns, growls, and gas, that's your soundtrack at the moment. Hopefully you won't be listening to it for a long time, but with her, you never know. You might be there all night, really.
3:57 - She heads back inside the house, taking away the sounds of the outside while bringing you towards her own room. Or at least that's what you guess, based on what you hear outside and how you can physically feel how and when she turns.
4:14 - The liquid in her stomach loudly bubbles as part of it drains into her intestines, right before you're squeezed into the next part of her digestive system, her tighter bowels. The slimy walls are snug around your body even as you slide smoothly through them, and with each curve the walls push into one side of you or another. Her footsteps are all the more resonant too, especially louder when you are pushed further towards one hindpaw versus the other. It's a slow, but easy journey, nothing that gets in your way, and no pressure besides the natural squeezes of her bowels pushing you through. Eventually she starts to move cushioning around outside, which you know from the last few times she's done this and how she's learned how little you enjoy kitty litter.
5:11 - Finally around the last bend and coming to a stop, you can finally see some light again. Just a tiny aura of red light in front of your face, which you wouldn't be able to see if your eyes hadn't been trying to adjust to the darkness of a Luxray's stomach for the past few minutes. She shuffles her feet outside, sighs, and..
5:17 - Her body pushes you out of her bowels, and back into fresh air. And bright light. You slide out with ease, slowly being released onto a waiting pillow that, being meant for her to sleep on, was more than able to catch your whole body. The air is much colder outside her body than in, and especially with the slickness on your body from the long trip through her innards. Nothing a quick shower later wouldn't fix. She doesn't seem to notice any bad smell on you, though, after she's turned around and given you a sniff. And she's happy enough to see you, now that you're back. Or maybe she's wanting to remind you where you just were, as if you didn't know already. Regardless, she doesn't wait too long before giving you several short licks while you're on her pillow, her tongue as rough as ever.
5:43 - A low rumble starts from the pit of her stomach, rises up as air releases into her throat, and she takes in a long breath before letting out a gigantic belch right in your face, the air blasting over and around your head as you get a good whiff of how you-breath smells. A few more licks after the fact, and you're almost wondering how much of a trainer you actually are, with her this possessive of you.
6:01 - As if to make you question yourself more, she steps carefully over top of you, putting you right underneath her belly, and neatly lays down atop you, putting you between a furry stomach and a soft cushion. Well....at least you're not cold from being back again in the open air, anymore. Being stuck underneath her isn't quite as stuffy as her stomach was, too. But still, it looks like despite getting out of her stomach and bowels, you weren't away from her yet, and given that she uses this cushion for snoozing... You think maybe you should get some rest too, since you're probably not going anywhere for a long while..

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