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Juno sends Diana and Amelia off hunting! Because they're getting along so well. :P
Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
now I'm wondering if juno actually followed them or not like she promised Amelia?
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Posted by YesImCanadian 7 years ago Report
Will Amelia ever get a break...
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Posted by Aces 7 years ago Report
Not likely. :D Unless she gets bigger.
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Posted by LordDantai 7 years ago Report
Are we going to see Zuzen get some action in the future? Its been eight chapters since the start of the new ACT and I haven't seen M/ tag pop up. It just feels like you have forgotten the male predator side of your audience. I thought you kept everything well balanced in the first ACT but now everything comes across so one sided.
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Posted by Aces 7 years ago Report
Actually the very next chapter there's a bit. Though I can try to get more of him in the future. With Violet present, expect to see more M/F vore.
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Posted by Killjoy364 7 years ago Report
I don't want to be rude but there is no reason to point out that there is less m predator parts since almost all of the preds are female plus we are just the readers we don't control where the story goes or who the important people are so please sit back and enjoy the story for what it is if that's ok and sorry in advance for this
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Posted by LordDantai 7 years ago Report
However that is exactly why I rose my concern over the lack of male pred content. Zuzen is the only male pred here and was the prominent focus of Act 1, giving the perception that the story was going to be primarily Male pred base with Female pred scenes generously immersed within. Zuzen is the only character that I (and did) identify and connect with, he was the main reason that I so looked forward to the series so much.
To be purely honest, as a reader, I feel betrayed and, well, forgotten. I came into this second act with a level of expectation from the content of the previous act and now its like I am being told that I am no longer wanted.
Now if I was wrong and this was supposed to be a primarily Female pred series then fine. I am not asking Ace to change everything to suit my wants and needs. Its Ace's show and I don't have the right change it. I purely wanted to know if I should stop following the series now and preserve what I have read so far instead of drudging though a second act that could make me hate all of it.
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Posted by Aces 7 years ago Report
The story shifts with many characters. I dart between them as the narrative suits it. Diana plays a long term role that involves some other characters so I need some time to flesh her out and get her established.
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