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I am beyond rusty.
But hey, I still exist?
I hope the first person and possibly bad writing is not too off-putting.
Any requests I have left will be handled when I can write again.

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maxpayne98

Posted by maxpayne98 5 years ago Report

I like it :3 there was just one typo that I could see

Thousandpath

Posted by Thousandpath 5 years ago Report

I am happy that you like it. Mind telling me where it is so that I may remove it?

maxpayne98

Posted by maxpayne98 5 years ago Report

Second paragraph, 3rd line: *hardly*

Thousandpath

Posted by Thousandpath 5 years ago Report

Fixed now, thank you for the information.

maxpayne98

Posted by maxpayne98 5 years ago Report

Sure thing ^u^

HungryAL

Posted by HungryAL 5 years ago Report

I haven't seen anything from you in a while, but this was a great story to ease you back into writing. Sl

Thousandpath

Posted by Thousandpath 5 years ago Report

Thank you very much. I know I have been away for way too long, but hopefully I can get myself writing again.

Zolatul

Posted by Zolatul 5 years ago Report

Damn, you call this 'rusty'? If so, I can't wait to look through more of your stuff! This was great, faved and gonna watch you from now on! Also, sorry if I seem too hyper, got too much coffee in me tonight...

Thousandpath

Posted by Thousandpath 5 years ago Report

It should probably be noted that this was an experiment as well. I usually have not focused as well on the actual happening of the vore. Of course, I will aim towards such detail in the future, but I apologize if my previous stories are not up to par in your opinion.

TableManners

Posted by TableManners 4 years ago Report

This is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. Very simple, but very powerful.

Thousandpath

Posted by Thousandpath 4 years ago Report

Thank you for your compliment. I am happy to know putting more effort into the actual vore part worked.